托福試題tpo29【精選】獨(dú)立寫作滿分作文(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 首先交代了背景，世界變化很快，所以教授也需要緊跟潮流，改進(jìn)自己的課程。然后舉了具體例子，教育體系隨著科技變化而提高，教授內(nèi)容需要改進(jìn)。引出了第二條分論點(diǎn)教授只有增加收入才能緊跟時(shí)代潮流。此段功能本段提出了第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，因?yàn)榻淌谥挥性黾邮杖氩拍芫o跟時(shí)代潮流。并用具體例子證明，Today, many a person is shunning away from the education field because many careers now do offer a hefty package. This has bred a shortage of virtuous professors in many countries as the few that join do join as a last resort to enable them warm their pockets. Many university students take on other majors like accountancy and technological fields than education because they are more enticing than lecturing. Lecturing is being a career for students that are deemed failures in other fields. To revive the career, and to have more qualified professors to attain quality education, professors ought to pocket a reasonable amount of money so as to entice the gem among students to join the profession.內(nèi)容詳細(xì)條目段落此段結(jié)構(gòu)首句寫了背景，現(xiàn)在很多人遠(yuǎn)離教育行業(yè)，因?yàn)槠渌袠I(yè)提供了優(yōu)厚的工資。很多大學(xué)生進(jìn)入其他行業(yè)工作。而教育行業(yè)則被認(rèn)為是一定會(huì)失敗的。然后得出結(jié)論，也就是第三條分論點(diǎn)，要想復(fù)興這個(gè)行業(yè)，應(yīng)該給教授更多的工資，以吸引優(yōu)秀的大學(xué)生加入這個(gè)行業(yè)。此段功能本段提出了第三條分論點(diǎn)，因?yàn)橹挥刑岣呓淌诠べY才能夠吸引優(yōu)秀學(xué)生進(jìn)入教育行業(yè)。并通過(guò)演繹推理進(jìn)行證明。By and large, though I do believe that other solutions do carry water, like enhancing school facilities and awarding scholarships, it is mon sense to know that all these will also rotate around a professor as students can hardly acplish tasks in different fields without the help of professors. With no doubt, increasing professors39。 pay is the primal solution
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