【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 o matter how dark the world around us bees. In fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions. As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their ines are still low by international standard s, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they canbe it money or goodsto help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves. In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or plete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow bee, the more brightly the lamp of love shines. 背誦 7 圖表作文 粗線條；原因，沒(méi)點(diǎn)拓展一下；措施建議 99年 作文 (三 )評(píng)卷實(shí)例 Directions: A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words. B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ . C. Your essay should cover these three points: 1. effect of the country39。s growing human population on its wildlife（描述圖表，想大于現(xiàn)狀，粗線條的描寫(xiě)） 2. Possible reason for the effect 3. Your suggestion for wildlife protection 樣卷 1. 得分 14 15句話 背誦 8 From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several possible reasons for this. First, with a rapid growth of population (as the human population expands), more and more people came to(逐漸開(kāi)始 ) live where some wild species have been living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably cannot adapt to the new environment and die. Second, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money. Third, with the development of industry, the natural balance and the ecological environment are destroyed. The deforestation(采伐森林 ) has bee more and more serious. So(鎖定 這一段 some of the wild lives bee homeless and extinct. 123 In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the government s should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love nature and protect it. Third, as for ours elves, we should take practical actions to protect our living 8 P18 范文三老師寫(xiě)的 在寫(xiě)一些文章時(shí)，不可避免的會(huì)有一些核心概念，避免重復(fù)。 ①人口增長(zhǎng) 野生動(dòng)物 滅絕 構(gòu)成威脅 THE UPS AND DOWNS OF POPULATION GROWTH 背誦 9 The two charts show that the ① increase in the . population has been acpanied by a corresponding decline in the number of wildlife species. Far too many species have been lost already. This poses a danger to the ecological balance. As the human population ② expands, more and more wild animals are hunted for food, or because they are thought to present a threat to man. But studies show that one of the primary causes of the disappearance of wildlife is pollution, which is one of the consequences of population ③ growth and economic development. This makes us wonder if man is able to share this pla in harmony with other life forms. In my opinion, it is imperative(迫切的 ) to take steps to reverse the disturbing(令人困惑的 ) trend illustrated in the charts. One measure would be to forbid the building of cities in areas where wild life is threatened with extinction. But, more importantly, man must learn to stop polluting the environment, or he himself will bee extinct. 背誦 9 舉例時(shí)，有兩種方式： 1． 舉幾個(gè)例子，每個(gè)例子都是高度濃縮，高度的提煉。 2． 舉一個(gè)例子，把這個(gè)例子細(xì)化。 最后要有一個(gè)主題句，在后面 鎖定段落 范文十一 Statistics in People39。s Daily Expenses in Xi39。an Year Item 1995 1996 1997 1998 1999 Food 66 61 48 41 36 Clothing 9 10 12 15 18 Recreation 4 5 8 9 11 Others 21 24 32 35 35 Total 100 100 100 100 100 背誦 10 What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the people39。s daily expenses in Xi39。an from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7%. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another. There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased ine resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total ine is enough to cover food expense. Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time. As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increases year after year. From the analyses made above, we may e to the conclusion that people39。s living standards in Xi39。an have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction. 背誦 10 提綱：（這篇題沒(méi)給） 1． 描述圖表，現(xiàn)狀 2． 原因 3． 預(yù)測(cè)未來(lái) 圖表作文的變體 A. Write an essay that conveys the information in the following char