【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 lacethemwith,we ’dhavetoliveinentireblackoutagainlikeourancestorshavedohou’ sofcoursenotwhatanyonewouldwanttosee. Duetotechnicallimitations,peoplestillhavetoutilizetheseresourcesnow. Asaresult,dbedevelopedandappliedtoreduceenergycostinindustryanddailyliteanypracticethatwastesenergy. Humanshaveoveresomanycrisesinhistory,andwe ’resuretowinthistimealso. 第四篇：大學(xué)英語四級優(yōu)秀作文 大學(xué)英語四級考試優(yōu)秀范文 Part1:2021 年 12 月 ，父母應(yīng)該?? HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent ①Itisbeyondreproachthatchildrenarealwaysconsideredtheappleofparents ” eyes,whichisespeciallytrueinsinglechildfamilies. ②However,manyparentsgosofarastotakeovereverythingfortheirlifeandstudyeventotheirfuture. ③Itisnotunusualtowitnessthatanincreasingnumberofchildrenareacpaniedbyparentontheirfirstdayincollege. ④Ideclareinnouncertaintermsthatitwillendupwiththechildren ”,bein, ⑤whatshouldparentsdo? Inmyhumbleopinion, ⑥ontheonehand,parentsshouldraisechildreninafreerangingwayinsteadofbeing “ helicopter ”parents,whoalwaysseemtohoverovertheirchildren。 ⑦ontheotherhand,parentsshouldteachchildrentoberesponsiblefortheirownbehaviorsinsteadofmonopolizingeverything. ⑧Iclingtothebeliefthatonlywhenparentsrealizewhatisbetterfortheirchildrenandcaretheminarightway,cantheyhelpchildrendevelopindependence. 精彩點評：①引入話題：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然過渡：但是，有些父母卻為孩子包辦一切。③引用生活中的實例，證實父母為孩子包辦并非空穴 來風(fēng)。④分析包辦所帶來的后果。⑤提出問題：父母應(yīng)該如何做？⑥和⑦具體闡述解決問題的策略，層次分明。⑧簡要總結(jié)前文所提的具體側(cè)咧，是文章結(jié)尾不顯突兀。 加分亮點： beyondreproach 無可非議 beacpaniedby?有??陪同 declareinnouncertainterms 毫不諱言 fiercepetition 激烈的競爭 essential 至關(guān)重要的 clingtothebelief 堅信 Part2:2021 年 6 月 拼寫 ?? ，我認(rèn)為?? DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling Nowadays, ①anincreasingnumberofstudentsseemtoattachlessimportancetospellinginEnglishlearning. ②Thus,numerousmisspellingsappearintheirpapers, ③ andwhat ”sworse,awellanizedessayisthereforetotallyimpossible. ④Therearevariousreasonsresponsibleforthisembarrassingsituation. ⑤Foronthing,muchmorestudentsgiveprioritiestooralEnglishatthecostofdosinglessspellingexercises,letalonereflectonwhattheylearnedtheotherday. ⑥Foranother,manyteachersputsomuchemphasisonmunicationandgrammarinteachingthattheyseldomhighlightspelling,andoccasionallyworsestill,theythemselvesarecaughtinspelling. Tochangethissituation, ⑦Iholdtothebeliefthatstudentsandteachersshouldworktogether. ⑧Ontheonehand,studentsshouldstopplainingaboutspellings,andtheyshouldrealizecorrectspellingisamustinlearningEnglish. ⑨Ontheotherhand,teachersshouldpaymoreattentiontospellinginteaching,forexample,focusingonpronunciationandwordformation. Onlyviajointeffortcanstudentsgainmuchgroundinspelling. 精彩點評： ①開門見山，描述現(xiàn)象：很多學(xué)生不重視拼寫。②和③使用thus,andwhat” sworse 說明 該現(xiàn)象造成的結(jié)果：拼寫錯誤連篇，文章結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。④本段分析造成上述結(jié)果的原因。⑤和⑥ foronthing?foranother?具體列舉不同的原因，層次分明。⑦概括提出解決問題的方法。⑧和⑨使用 ontheonehand? ontheotherhand?結(jié)構(gòu)，針對上述成因，提出兩種對應(yīng)的解決方案。最后結(jié)尾常用的倒裝句，總結(jié)前文。 加分亮點： embarrassing 令人為難的，尷尬的 giveprioritiesto認(rèn)為優(yōu)先 Putemphasison 強調(diào) Part3： 2021 年 12 月 ?? ，我們應(yīng)該?? CreatingaGreenCampus Duringrecentyears, ①thetopicofagreencampus,whichhasarousedwidelypublicattention,isbeingmoreandmorepopular. ②Undoubtedly,agreencampus,theindispensablepartforthedevelopmentofcollegestudents,hasaprofoundimpactonbothindividualsandsociety,foritssignificancecannotbeneglected Agreenenvironment,ratherthananythingelse,playsadecisiverolei, ③itshouldalsobementionedthatapreencampusincludesnotonlytheplaceswherethestudentslive,reensurrounding,thatcase, ④innoplaceotherthancampusshouldweattempttomakeagreenatmosphere. Duetotheseriousnessofthesituation,itiscrucialforustotakeeffectivemeasurestocreateagreencampus. ⑤ Inthefirstplace,it ”sessentialthatlawandregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedbythegovernmentandauthorities. ⑥Furthermore,itishightimethatweenhancedtheawarenessofthestudentsthemselves. ⑦ken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatagreencampuswillbeachievedinthenearfuture. 精彩點評：①開門見山，提出綠色校園的話題已經(jīng)引起社會關(guān)注。②點名綠色校園的重要意義。③用 notonly..butalso 句型介紹綠色校園的內(nèi)涵和外延。④半倒裝句的運用恰到好處，引出下文要闡述的內(nèi)容，即社會各界應(yīng)行動起來，推動綠色校園的建設(shè)。⑤和⑥結(jié)構(gòu)連接詞 inthefirstplace 和 furthermore 的運用，使得論述清晰明了。⑦結(jié)尾常用的倒裝句，總結(jié)前文。 加分亮點： undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地 indispensable 必 不可少的，必需的 significance 意義 Part4:2021 年 6 月 ，目的是?? ? FreeAdmissionstoMuseums? ①Recently,doingso,theycanattractmorevisitors,andofferthevisitorsmoreopportunitiestoexploreandgeteasyaccesstotheworldofhistory,cultureandknowledge. ②However,somepeopleviewthatthepracticealsobringsproblemsandco. ③Forohing,theirmainconcernisthatwithmorevisitors,itispossiblethatobjectsexhibitedcangetdamagedmoreeasily. ④Foranother,itbeesahugeeconomicburdenformuseumstorunasusualwithoutanyprofitsfromthevisitors. ⑤Inmyopinion,inthefactthatthegovernmentshouldprovidemoreopportunitiesforc,kidsandteenagerscanacquireknowledgeinamorevividwayinthemuseums.⑥Ihopeallthepeoplecansharethesamenationaltreasuresinmorefreemuseums. 精彩點評：①開門見山，提出論點。并說明這樣做的目的。②話題一轉(zhuǎn)，闡明這個舉措的弊端。③和④運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞 Forohing?Foranother? ,使文章層次分明。⑤利用 inmyopinion 銜接文章，引出自己的觀點。⑥最后提出希