【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 t that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great ，成功是衡量該話題是否積極的唯一標準。該段首句設(shè)置爆發(fā)力句型，增加氣勢，讓老師給出很高的第一印象分，借此開頭很有特色。 Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the ing 義法論述：毅力 — 在困境中堅持，做好細節(jié)，準備成功； It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing 句是英語的極品句型，大氣磅礴。此萬能句子是任何積極事物都可以幫助我們克服困難 ,征服挑戰(zhàn) ,走向成功 . Unless we stick to our dream,(適當把主題詞進行同義替換 )we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. 雙重否定句子從反面論證宏觀說明危害性，如果缺乏該積極事物就生活郁悶挫折被競爭所淘汰。 To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below. To begin with In addition Last but not the least No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (舉例證明把 for example 寫成十四個很有特色，而且表明下面的例 子很重要，又增加一分，老師看了這么多 for example，審美疲勞，老師一看該句，一定激動。 Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’ t persist (是堅持的同意改寫 )especially when they face the music. 4 Many people who。 just because。想成功 但失敗因為他們不能堅持特別是遇到困難的時候， Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge 倒裝并列句在段落末尾寫，增加氣勢，第二段結(jié)尾很重要，不要晚節(jié)不保。倒裝句在結(jié)尾補充再好不過。此句很萬能，表明只有該積極事物讓我們永遠成功； 三： 5— 6 句話，承上啟下總結(jié)上文，兩點建議，展望美好未來 From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair. From 。。承上啟下 , 引起下文 , 多達二十五個單詞的總結(jié)句 表明無論做大事小事，難事容易事，都需要積極事物支持我們 。 It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the ing goals. 建議措施的總起句子 , 引起下文，被動句子很有風(fēng)采 . On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream. 結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰 ,sensible 表明建議很理性 , 從反方面再談很辨證 . However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 這個閃光的萬能句多達 25 個單詞，強調(diào)實踐的重要性 .而且還有諺語 ,表明建議用于實踐。 話題二：打敗自我，不斷改正自身缺陷吸收別人長處，完善自我，自信面對人生； 1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others Defeating ourselvesfight with our defectsperfect ourselvesconfidentperseveranthave a better understanding of ourselves As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點信息 . There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other petitors is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shorting and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that make