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remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 語(yǔ)句涌順, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息;Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買(mǎi)的音樂(lè)機(jī)器人。【詳解】這是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個(gè)音樂(lè)機(jī)器人,其次表達(dá)為什么“我”要介紹這個(gè)機(jī)器人,也就是對(duì)它的喜愛(ài)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。4.三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束,你一定對(duì)初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。下周五你班要召開(kāi)畢業(yè)班會(huì),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的英文提示,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以“I remember ”為題,寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文,分享你校園生活中的一次活動(dòng)或經(jīng)歷。要點(diǎn)如下:1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment?4. How has the event changed your life? 注意:,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。I remember How time flies! My junior school life is ing to an end. 【答案】I rememberHow time flies, my junior school life is ing to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale. When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children. It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如e to an end,plan to do,a lot of,hold a charity sale,prepare for,in our spare time,hold on,at first,e to join us,give us some help,in the end,a lot,in need等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使