【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 3． “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵(lì)；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。請(qǐng)以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語園地投稿。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個(gè)激勵(lì)過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個(gè)人；然后介紹他是如何激勵(lì)你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。4．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。5．寫作: 81. 目前，很多高中都開設(shè)了特色課程，涵蓋烘焙、舞蹈、鋼琴、跆拳道、足球等內(nèi)容，很大程度上增加了校園生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。 作為即將升入高中的你，對(duì)于特色文化課程有何看法？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示完成一篇短文并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Views