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:6月26日下午3:00.2. 地點(diǎn):六樓會(huì)議室3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容:1) 對(duì)老師用話(huà)語(yǔ)表達(dá)謝意;2)與同學(xué)交流自己的將來(lái)的夢(mèng)想;3)師生合影,互贈(zèng)留言等等。參考詞匯:look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..備注:詞數(shù)100左右,通知開(kāi)頭已擬好,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the 【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Don39。t be late! That39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late等。而復(fù)雜單句結(jié)構(gòu)In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear , we are going to take some photos with our teachers and ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5.假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書(shū)。 提示:陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物,可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少,因?yàn)椋?)人們砍伐森林,大象漸漸失去家園;2)人們捕殺大象,獲取象牙。3)應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。要求:1)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí);2)80詞左右。倡議書(shū)的結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書(shū),倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型,以免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,為使句子具有連貫性,可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí);Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性,是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。6.書(shū)面表達(dá)常州市政府發(fā)