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現(xiàn)在并還可能繼續(xù)延續(xù)下去的動作.結(jié)合語境,注意人稱變化及動詞過去分詞變化.二、英語書面表達專項訓練2.李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華, 請你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點:1. 中秋節(jié)的時間;2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式:全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等;3, 我最期待的活動。要求:〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù));, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié),要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。全文可分兩大部分,第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式,第二部分寫我最期待的活動。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如get together,enjoy the full moon, share our stories等。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。3. 朋友是我們生活的組成部分,他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時候陪伴我們。你最好的朋友是誰?你是怎么看待你們的友誼的?請以“My Best Friend ”為題,根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個提綱作文。題目給出了標題及寫作要點。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時,會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時態(tài)。另外在寫作時可以適當使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯?!军c睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時也可以包括日?;顒印r態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時,注意主謂一致關(guān)系。4. 為提升南京城市形象,我市已啟動老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設(shè)你是 Tim,請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示,用英文向你的外國筆友 Jack 做簡單的介紹。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3 詞數(shù) 80 左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing.