【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 作亮點(diǎn)：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。3． 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末，他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：簡述事件；談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ⒔oDaming一些建議。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。4．書面表達(dá)地球是我們的家園，我們作為地球的主人，就應(yīng)該好好保護(hù)地球?，F(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費(fèi)地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？談?wù)勀愕南敕?。?nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 節(jié)約用水、用電；2. 節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護(hù)森林；3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土地上種樹；4. 不亂丟雜物，保護(hù)環(huán)境；要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；80詞左右提示詞：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won39。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。(1)5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。(2)早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車程大約半小時(shí)。(3)上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識(shí)，并為朋友們購買了禮物。(4)第二天清晨，我們登上了長城，雄偉的長