【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 reading．Moreover，some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同時(shí)First of all，/ Second，/ Third等時(shí)間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運(yùn)用，既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明，還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5． 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開(kāi)，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道，對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來(lái)信向你了解中國(guó)文化。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信給Danny。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長(zhǎng)（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn)，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國(guó)的文化。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意不要漏寫(xiě)。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求，對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫(xiě)作時(shí)目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫(xiě)的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。6．寫(xiě)作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動(dòng)。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.