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ical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文,根據所給材料,闡明關于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點,而且最后還要表達出自己的觀點,所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章分為三個部分,第一部分,首先引出本文話題,并用Here’s the result from one , 引出調查結果;第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點列舉理由時,要注意條理性,比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then;或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等;本文內容完整,寫作條理清晰,語言表達準確,是一篇不錯的文章。4.同學們,初中生活即將結束,本次考試后,盼望已久的假期就要到來!請你根據以下提示,制定出度假計劃,可以結合自己的實際發(fā)揮。 寫作內容:,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。,幫家長做家務。 寫作要求: 詞左右,開頭部分已給出,但不計入規(guī)定字數。;要點齊全;句子及篇章結構正確、連貫;書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析:短文要制定出度假計劃,文章需要用第一人稱“I”進行書寫,不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內容為計劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法,不能遺漏要點。寫作亮點:短文用了一些短語和句式,如:e to an end結束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等,句子過度自然。用了because引導的原因狀語從句,增加了文章的亮點??键c:考查提綱作文。5.請你根據以下內容提示,以“The Story of L