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he western marriage is related to their traditional culture and religious belief say “I believe that after some years there will be no difference in nation, color of skin, culture and language.” Is it possible? Can people all over the world live in the same nation and have the same color of skin,the same culture and language? 這一問題是考查你頭腦是否清楚。全世界的人怎么能是同一膚色,講同一種語言呢?事實(shí)上,你沒能正確地表達(dá)你的意思。你要表達(dá)的意思應(yīng)該是:As there will be more munication and cultural exchanges between peoples all over the world,people will understand each other better and there will be some changes in their culture and customs. people in America throw rice to the newly wed couple at the wedding ceremony? Do you have any evidence? 提出這一問題是考查你的相關(guān)知識(shí)。既然把它作為論文來研究,必然要了解很多相關(guān)的知識(shí),而且一定有論據(jù)來支持你的觀點(diǎn)。為使論文有說服力,寫論文時(shí)應(yīng)閱讀大量相關(guān)書籍。 have mentioned the Traditional Chinese it only belong to Chinese minor ethnic group or to the general? 這一問題是考查你在利用某種素材時(shí)是否認(rèn)真思考過。你所描述的應(yīng)該是中國普遍的婚俗而不是某一地區(qū)、某一少數(shù)民族的婚俗,因?yàn)橹袊泻芏嗌贁?shù)民族,而他們有著自己很獨(dú)特的婚俗。 your essay you described both the traditional and the modern wedding in English speaking countries, esp, not the modem wedding in China? 你的論文的目的應(yīng)該是促進(jìn)全球文化交流,但你僅僅描述一種在中國少見的婚俗,卻大量描述了西方的傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代的婚俗,這在結(jié)構(gòu)