【正文】 150詞左右的作文，出現(xiàn)的問題也就不會這么多。v學習各家的長處，走自己的路。v教師往往受到啟發(fā)。不少專家提出了改進的辦法，但是我們首先要解決一個重要的問題：批改作業(yè)的目的。v所提及的問題是前進中的問題。v一般的原則 :，鼓勵學生多寫。v兩個實例實例 (1) I am very glad to see that you are making progress each time. I think it is a good essay. The structure is very clear and you anize your points in a logically way. You used definition and examples to make your essay more convincing. at the beginning you mentioned some people don’t regard plagiarism as a serious matter which makes your essay an argumentative one. Good job! I think this is just where I failed. Perhaps in the future, you’d better pay more attention to some specific words to make what you said more accurate. I am a little confused by some of your sentences. And I think the ending is a little weak. (Wang XX ^_^ )實例 (2) Comments from Tian XX: Basically, this is a good essay. Your words are very powerful, and there are many convincing examples. I appreciate your language. There are some suggestions: You can develop more powerful and direct to