【正文】 But if you has no preparing for it, the opportunity will lose. Those who have many preparation and much knowledge, and some good virtue, may I quip the opportunity firmly. For example, two men are appealing for a job in a pany, and there is only one vacant job for the only one of the two men. How, the two man has an opportunity to get the job but the boss certainly would accept the good one. 　　So I think the opportunity is existing to every one, but more opportunity is belongs to who has knowledge, experience, encourage and confident. 　　該篇文章條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎，幾乎沒有正確的句子，得2分。 有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。)正反觀點對比可以說 Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter/former point of view.(權(quán)衡正反兩種觀點，我傾向于后者／前者的看法)，這樣就不用為字?jǐn)?shù)發(fā)愁了！※ 大作文的時間３０35分鐘，５分鐘構(gòu)思（確定模塊，舉例，論據(jù)等），２０分鐘寫，５分鐘檢查。hand, we should read selectively for special knowledge, which needs our concentration and careful study. On the other hand, we should read extensively for the information or entertainment, which leads to a colorful life. Therefore, ReadingThe provided _____chart as above informs us the key data regarding ____________(主題詞) in the year ranging from…to… which is posed of　_____sections/parts/units/items.2. 首先，我們看圖，它是關(guān)于。The influence/impact/effect exerted/imposed/posed by the environmental problems to all the people is profound/deep/serious, which deserves our further discussion.2. 其次，我們看這個想象的負(fù)面性/措施After/Following that, we will move on to the side effects/negative impact upon our life/measures to be taken.3. 自從改革開放以來，中國發(fā)生了很大的變化。※ 拼寫不大確定的詞一定不要寫！判卷老師最強的能力就是找錯字，而且這是他判斷你寫作能力的重要尺度！當(dāng)你文章中出現(xiàn)了3個以上的拼寫錯誤的時候，可以說你已經(jīng)mission fail了。（即表達(dá)得一塌糊涂）5分－ 基本切題?！?中心句的寫法模式性，一般背20句，不管出什么題都能從中挑出3~4句用上，各種題型背一些。s more, there is more gas and noise pollution in the city, which is full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the roar of buses and taxies, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds. In contrast, living near the countryside one can enjoy the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the quiet, peaceful surroundings the essentials of a healthy life. 　　The new suburban life is fast being a predominant pattern of living in most cities。Sample Composition 時間，地點，名稱)，which…Then/ Furthermore/What’s more/In addition, what can’t be ignored/neglected/avoided/forgotten is/consists in/goes to/deals with/has something to do with_____(名稱，數(shù)據(jù))，which…簡寫版：What’s more, what can’t be ignored consists in…, which SV3. 小結(jié)綜上所述，上述描述表明（歌功頌德，抨擊時弊）1） To sum up/summarize/be short/be brief2） In summary/short/ brief/a word.The abovementioned/illustrated/presented details/perspectives/description indicate/show/imply/suggest that…頂級版：To sum up, the aboveillustrated description indicate that Striking progress, in the year since 1978 when the policy of reform and opening to the outside world is carried on, has occurred to China.數(shù)據(jù)比較：大于：be senior/prior/proceeding to…by+數(shù)據(jù)小于：be junior/second/next to…The year of 2000 is 數(shù)據(jù)，following b （小于數(shù)據(jù)）The year of 2000 is 數(shù)據(jù)，followed by （大于數(shù)據(jù)）A的GDP大于B的GDP20萬元。on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運；2. 我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運氣無關(guān)，…to。（即表達(dá)得清清楚楚）14分－ 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤?！?檢查，這個時間千萬不要數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)，主要是找拼寫和語法的錯誤，主要是全篇文章時態(tài)一致、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致！記住小的地方可以改，但決不要整句整句的改，縮短老師的評卷時間、使老師高興是及格和打高分的首要條件！注意一些常用詞，常用短語不要用錯?。?！Convenient, essential, obvious, characteristics/feature, environmental protection, prefer。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a positionAfter/Following that, we will move on/transfer/continue to____(小標(biāo)題。My View on Fake CommoditiesFake modities are disastrous for a society. The disasters they have brought are so many that I can only name a few here. First, the normal economic order is greatly destroyed. Commodities of famous brands and high quality pile up in stores unsold while poor goods are everywhere in markets. Second, fair petition between businessmen falls victim to fake modities. Good modities can not beat poor ones because of the latter’s low cost and low prices. To make things worse, fake modities bring great loss to people. For example, we often hear that farmers toil and sweat for a year without harvesting anything owing to false seeds or poor fertilizer. Some people even die thanks to the fake wine, or poisonous food. The worst of all, the society is severely polluted by the mad desire for money.We must put an end to fake modities by all means. First of all, we should strengthen our laws. Laws must punish anyone who produces or sells fake modities, besides pensating for all the losses caused by them as well. Another thing we should do is to launch a long and wide antfake modity campaign. Everyone should keep an eye on fake modities and refuse to buy or use fake modities. Once being cheated, the buyer should have the courage to expose and attack the lawbreaker. In this way, there will be no market for fake modities.寫作金句：1. 該問題與價值觀/環(huán)境污染有關(guān)，值得我們深思。 and with the improvement of traffic and the perfection of services, it will prove to hold great superiority over city life.1. 面試在求職過程中的作用：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業(yè)知識、自信、實事求是……How to Succeed in a Job Interview?Nowadays, a job interview is very important to both the interviewer and interviewee. To an interviewer, he can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as salary, working conditions and also the development prospects of the pany. To an interviewee, he can make use of the chance to know the work he is going to take up. After a full and frank exchange of information, an interviewer i