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對比可以說 Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter/former point of view.(權衡正反兩種觀點,我傾向于后者/前者的看法),這樣就不用為字數(shù)發(fā)愁了!※ 大作文的時間3035分鐘,5分鐘構思(確定模塊,舉例,論據(jù)等),20分鐘寫,5分鐘檢查?!?拼寫不大確定的詞一定不要寫!判卷老師最強的能力就是找錯字,而且這是他判斷你寫作能力的重要尺度!當你文章中出現(xiàn)了3個以上的拼寫錯誤的時候,可以說你已經mission fail了。 4. 行文要求 1) 切題:統(tǒng)一,無不相關細節(jié)內容 2) 條理清楚:連貫、和諧 注意銜接語的使用 3) 簡潔:句子要簡練 4) 準確:減少語法錯誤,符合英語的表達習慣,避免漢語式英語 …In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, …/ As I see it,… this is not necessarily a bad thing, because…In the first place…For instance… In the second place… Even more important is the fact that…/what’ more/moreoverIn conclusion…in a brief※ 文章的內容不重要!重要的是框架(背)!習慣先看每段的首句+文章末句,再瀏覽全文挑錯字和語法錯誤,所以要寫成3段,每段首句為中心句,結尾再總結一下,這樣老師只看3~4句話就可以給出分數(shù)了,節(jié)省時間自然分數(shù)就高了。表達思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好,基本上無語言錯誤,僅有個別小錯。 有些地方表達思想不夠清楚,文字勉強連貫;語言錯誤相當多,其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。(即表達得一塌糊涂)5分- 基本切題。表達思想不清楚,連貫性差。(即表達得勉勉強強)11分- 切題。(即表達得漂漂亮亮)例如: 1) 有人認為機會是極少的 2) 有人認為機會人人都有 3) 我的看法 Sample 1 As to the opportunity, there is two different opinions: first, someone think opportunity is little in their life. Secondly, someone consider that opportunity is existing everywhere everybody has some kinds of chance. According to my life experiment and knowledge I agree with the second idea. There is chance for everyone in some unexpected case. But if you has no preparing for it, the opportunity will lose. Those who have many preparation and much knowledge, and some good virtue, may I quip the opportunity firmly. For example, two men are appealing for a job in a pany, and there is only one vacant job for the only one of the two men. How, the two man has an opportunity to get the job but the boss certainly would accept the good one. So I think the opportunity is existing to every one, but more opportunity is belongs to who has knowledge, experience, encourage and confident. 該篇文章條理不清,思想紊亂,語言支離破碎,幾乎沒有正確的句子,得2分。※ 中心句的寫法模式性,一般背20句,不管出什么題都能從中挑出3~4句用上,各種題型背一些?!?作文中出現(xiàn)一些閃光詞匯和句型(比如成語chances prefer to ready ones, all roads lead to Roma等,多被動句,插入語等,句式變化多樣),對分數(shù)的提高有很大幫助的!建議背一些模塊長句。※ 內容切題,但不新穎不重要,不要為了想個好的例子浪費時間,第一是你未必想的出來,第二是你想出來了也寫不出來,第三是你寫出來了老師也不會看!所以要寫最簡單的例子。 dishonesty in exams. It is true that cheating and dishonest practices are in every walk of our lives.There are many reasons explaining these dishonest behaviors. The main reason is that most people neglect the moral values in pursuit of their material benefits. What is more, we lack effective laws and regulations of supervision. Thirdly, most dishonest people can escape the punishment. As a result , the problem of dishonesty bees more and more serious.Considering all these, I still want to argue that it pays to be honest in the long run. For one thing,honesty is a traditional virtue of our Chinese. For another, even dishonest people like making friends with honest people. In conclusion, people seldom deny that it pays to be honest.It Pays to Be HonestAs is known to all, we often hear plaints about dishonesty. People seem to get accustomed to many dishonest behaviors. In fact, there are dishonest practices in every walk of our lives.The reasons of social dishonesty lie in several aspects. Firstly, most people neglect moral values in pursuit of their material benefits. Secondly, unfair petitions worsen the situation. Thirdly, we lack powerful and effective laws to cope with this problem. Finally, many dishonest people may escape punishment easily. As a matter of fact, to be honest will be good for both honest people and others. On the one hand, behaving yourself in an honest way can win respects from others. On the other hand, being honest is an essential step towards our spiritual civilization. Therefore, it pays to be honest in the long run.How to Solve the Energy Problem a. 有人認為解決能源危機的方式是厲行節(jié)約 b. 有人則認為開發(fā)新的能源是最好的辦法 c. 我的看法 Some people hold that the solution to energy crisis is to save energy while others claim that the best approach is to develop new sources of energy. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter. It is obvious that even if we can save much energy, we can only delay the energy crisis, but cannot solve the problem pletely. On the other hand, there are still limitless sources of energy waiting for to explore: such as the sun, the sea and the air. For example, we can make use of the sun to produce solar energy.So in the long run, we must develop new sources of energy instead of merely conserving the known, limited supplies. 標題:How to Achieve Success 提綱:1)有人說成功主要靠運氣; 2)有人則認為成功主要靠勤奮,與運氣毫無關系。s more, there is more gas and noise pollution in the city, which is full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the roar of buses and taxies, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds. In contrast, living near the countryside one can enjoy the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the quiet, peaceful surroundings the essentials of a healthy life. The new suburban life is fast being a predominant pattern of living in most cities。How I Finance My College EducationNowadays, tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to finance our college education has bee a big concern. We can deal with it in various ways. We can get all of the money from our parents or we can pletely depend on ourselves, doing a parttime job on summer or winter vacation. In addition, we can apply to some bank for students’ loan. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to bine the first two. It means my parents support me to some extent and meanwhile I do a parttime jobteaching children English1. 有人認為讀書要有選擇;2. 有人認為應當博覽群書;3. 我的看法。should be, according to my own understanding, both sele