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ch and you want to get it off your mind. What were you afraid of? I’m afraid when teachers and my parents find out, I will be in trouble. What do you think of it ? Maybe I should kick off this habit soon. The feeling of playing truancy is really bad. I must admit that I do cut school once in a while. Only last Friend, I missed two English classes on purpose and went home without telling anyone. With my parents away, I enjoyed myself watching TV. I felt really cool having a free time alone while the other poor children were learning the boring English classes. Why play truancy? School work sometimes is really two much and I want to get it off your mind. I’m worried about my school work. Maybe I should kick off this habit soon. 一是修改文法方面的問題,包括用詞.時態(tài)等方面的錯誤等 二是檢查邏輯關系,看前后觀點是否一致. 三是使用一些較為高級的句型,如非謂語結構. With 短語結構.倒裝句型.恰當?shù)倪B接詞.動詞詞組等 敘述類文章寫作模板: 1. 標題 2. 概括 [關于所讀的短文的梗概 (約 30詞 )] 3. 過渡句 4. 記敘文 (關于同一主題的 ) [按題目內(nèi)容要求 ] 5. 結束語 [點題 ] The whole story Why Cut School? This article points out a mon phenomenon playing truancy among students. It also gives us a picture of the forms truancy takes. Finally, it tells the attitude on the part of the schools. ( 33 words) The feeling of playing truancy is really bad. I must admit that I do cut school once in a while. Only last Friday, I missed two English classes on purpose and went home without telling anyone. With my parents away, I enjoyed myself watching felt really cool having a free time alone while the other poor children were learning the boring English classes. Why play truancy? School work sometimes is really too much and I want to get it off my mind. Besides, that English teacher of ours is really too hard on us and hardly any of us likes his class. Of course, when my teachers and my parents find out, I will be in trouble. I’m worried about my school work, too. Maybe I should kick off this habit soon. (121 words) 建議學生注意的問題 ;動詞的過去式、過去分詞的拼寫。 方法二: 找出文章的論點 、論據(jù) 、 結論。Success’s ahead! Your criticism will be appreciated!