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in the Color Run scheduled to take place in the City Botanical Garden on the first of next month. Known as the happiest 5km on the planet, the Color Run is a unique event that celebrates healthiness, happiness and individuality. All participants are expected to be dressed in white and end up looking like a rainbow, as different colors are thrown for every kilometer, which features the most fun part. If interested, you can register at the website , and do remember to wear white. Looking forward to your participation. Yours, Li hua 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫 一、評(píng)分原則1. 本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。?雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋部分主要內(nèi)容;?應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;?有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解;?應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫;整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。4. 評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。第三檔(7~9分)基本完成了試題規(guī)定的部分任務(wù)。(三)上下文的連貫性:按照內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)展開寫作,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或表達(dá)法使文章內(nèi)容連貫。?內(nèi)容豐富,應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。?寫出了若干有關(guān)內(nèi)容,應(yīng)用了4個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。?產(chǎn)出內(nèi)容太少,很少使用短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)