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er? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,講述一件我點(diǎn)贊的事情,我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運(yùn)用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng),長短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯(cuò)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。交通:新的飛機(jī)場已投入使用多年。注意句式的多變,長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用,提升文章的檔次。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型,如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格?!军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種