【正文】 the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。take a parttime jobexercise to keep healthy and read booksat 5 o’clockat 5 o’clock請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。英語總復(fù)習(xí)∶中考英語書面表達(dá)(提高)知識(shí)講解及答案1一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1．書面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上，同學(xué)們對(duì)“初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 4:45...do what we want, such as listening to music...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時(shí)Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。2. 介紹你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時(shí)間：不到一個(gè)半小時(shí)。（3）擅長的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)：球類運(yùn)動(dòng)。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請(qǐng)給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。100 詞左右。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。4．書面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛，時(shí)代呼喚愛。但很多人缺乏的不是感動(dòng)，而是一種顯示感動(dòng)的勇氣。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn)，寫一篇文章。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us o