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點(diǎn)飽餐一頓。(結(jié)尾兩段增加“做一個(gè)精神明亮的人”“還孩子以藍(lán)天”等內(nèi)容。)真的,是到了冷靜思考的時(shí)候了。這無(wú)異于因噎廢食。又不失生動(dòng),增加發(fā)展等級(jí)“深刻”“豐富”項(xiàng)的分?jǐn)?shù)。(標(biāo)題修改后,更切合題意,給讀者以正能量;首段添加語(yǔ)句后,不僅過(guò)渡巧妙,與下文銜接緊密,立意更為精準(zhǔn),內(nèi)容更為深刻,符合發(fā)展等級(jí)“深刻”一項(xiàng)的要求。其次,文章立意要力戒過(guò)分拔高。(結(jié)尾表達(dá)比較蒼白,既沒(méi)有緊扣題意,也沒(méi)有做到收束有力,影響基礎(chǔ)等級(jí)“表達(dá)”一項(xiàng)的得分。電視節(jié)目的形式與內(nèi)容恰恰是一個(gè)時(shí)代的縮影。中央電視臺(tái)教育頻道的《成長(zhǎng)不煩惱》就為他們搭建了一個(gè)解決問(wèn)題的平臺(tái)?!静∥恼宫F(xiàn)】看得再遠(yuǎn)一點(diǎn)我們身邊的物品在無(wú)聲地塑造著我們,而這種塑造愈是無(wú)聲,對(duì)我們的影響愈是深遠(yuǎn),以致把我們推向了兩個(gè)極端——正與邪。此后,王濛便一發(fā)而不可收,在國(guó)內(nèi)國(guó)際的短道速滑的舞臺(tái)上創(chuàng)造了一項(xiàng)又一項(xiàng)輝煌戰(zhàn)績(jī)。王濛1984年出生,10歲時(shí),被黑龍江省七臺(tái)河市業(yè)余體校短道速滑教練相中,開(kāi)始了速滑生涯。人們因循地生活著,一次次走過(guò)別人腳下的路,又一次次重復(fù)著別人的生活。看著身邊形形色色的人,卻也無(wú)一例外地向著同樣的目標(biāo)——同一個(gè)地方攀爬。在提出中心論點(diǎn)后,本文采用層進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)逐一論證了“勇氣”、“目標(biāo)”與“智慧”的關(guān)系,再加上以獨(dú)立的議論句加以過(guò)渡,使得大家可輕松順利把握全文。她成功了,她的勇于逆流而上沒(méi)有白費(fèi),因?yàn)樵谒聸Q心前,早已有了自己的目標(biāo),當(dāng)有目標(biāo)的那一刻起,成功也早已向她靠近??恐H穗y以想象的勇氣,靠著常人難以付出的辛勞,以及常人難以超越的毅力,即沒(méi)有趕上時(shí)代腳步,他仍不失為一位勇于逆流的智者。最后,還要注意文體不能寫(xiě)成四不像,標(biāo)題要符合文體特點(diǎn)并獨(dú)特新穎等一系列要求。老者的“嘆息”發(fā)出的顯然是聲聲無(wú)奈,而其認(rèn)為魚(yú)“只有偉大的精神,卻沒(méi)有偉大的目標(biāo)”,也就只能面臨死亡了。若干年后,一群登山者發(fā)現(xiàn)它還保持著游的姿態(tài)。(答出四點(diǎn)給8分)答案①落實(shí)監(jiān)管體制改革、創(chuàng)新監(jiān)管機(jī)制方式,以更好發(fā)揮國(guó)家宏觀調(diào)控的作用?!拔覀円駥?duì)貧困宣戰(zhàn)一樣,堅(jiān)決向污染宣戰(zhàn)。嚴(yán)守法規(guī)和標(biāo)準(zhǔn),用最嚴(yán)格的監(jiān)管、最嚴(yán)厲的處罰、最嚴(yán)肅的問(wèn)責(zé),堅(jiān)決治理餐桌上的污染,切實(shí)保障“舌尖上的安全”。我們要腳踏實(shí)地,從我做起,從現(xiàn)在做起,從點(diǎn)滴做起。(12分)(3)結(jié)合材料二、三,運(yùn)用《文化生活》中“發(fā)展中國(guó)特色社會(huì)主義文化”的知識(shí),就如何構(gòu)建好民眾的心靈家園提出合理建議。王大爺大度行為值得贊美,但我們?cè)陉P(guān)注這個(gè)老人善良的同時(shí),是不是更應(yīng)該關(guān)注他的困境,關(guān)注這個(gè)群體的命運(yùn)? 材料二:當(dāng)前,食品安全、暴力犯罪、人情冷漠、誠(chéng)信缺失等諸多問(wèn)題,常常觸碰民眾敏感的神經(jīng)。2013最火熱詞非“土豪”莫屬。者一事件啟示我們,作為一個(gè)網(wǎng)民應(yīng)該①行使公民權(quán)利,充分表達(dá)意愿 ②遵守社會(huì)公德,維護(hù)網(wǎng)絡(luò)秩序 ③樹(shù)立公民意識(shí),依法進(jìn)行維權(quán) ④履行公民義務(wù),尊重他人權(quán)益 A.①② B.①③ C.②③ D.②④ 2014年2月17日,國(guó)務(wù)院再次取消和下放64項(xiàng)行政審批事項(xiàng)并建議取消和下放6項(xiàng)依據(jù)有關(guān)法律設(shè)立的行政審批項(xiàng)目,將依照法定程序提請(qǐng)全國(guó)人大常委會(huì)修訂有關(guān)法律。A.①② B.②③④ C.①②③ D.①③十八屆三中全會(huì)提出,公有制經(jīng)濟(jì)和非公有制經(jīng)濟(jì)都是社會(huì)主義市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)的重要組成部分,都是我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的重要基礎(chǔ)。, a famous writer, likes to find as many chances as possible to attend literary events around the hopes to make friends with editors and book is crazy about music, especially electronic dance would like to go to a festival where she can enjoy different musical also has a strong interest in an outgoing girl, Victoria is very fond of performing hopes to take part in some performing art festivals to challenge and improve herself, and as a way to prepare for future television talent is in search of a festival in North Europe with a long history where he can appreciate great international performing arts, especially ballet and is a university student who majors in 39。wracking(令人頭痛的).Where do you start? Who should you make friends with? Which clubsshould you join?Luckily, there will be thousands of others in the same boat as you worrying about starting their university social life on the right just take it all in ’t rush into anything that you’ll regret for the next three is some top advice from past students on how to survive Freshers’ Week:●Learn sure you know British social etiquette(禮節(jié)).Have a few wine glasses and snacks handy for your housemates and friends.●Be cups of tea or even slices of toast can give you a head start in making friends.●Be more active you are, the more likely you’ll be to meet new people than if you’re someone who never leaves their room.●Bring a your door open when you’re in and that sends positive messages to your neighbors that you’re with a bit of clever planning and effort, Freshers’ Week can give you a great start to your university life and soon you’ll be passing on your experience to next year’s new recruits.31.Which of the following statements is FALSE according to the passage?A.October is generally the busiest month for universities.B.It’s a good idea to have a .A bit of planning can make Freshers’ Week .The first week of your every year at university is called Freshers’ Week.32.The underlined word “recruits” in the last paragraph refers to.A.coursesB.freshersC.neighborsD.challenges33.We can infer from the 4th paragraph that.A.the newers usually miss the days living at homeB.most of the students in the UK spend three years in universitiesC.many freshers are worried about how to fit university life D.a(chǎn)ll the new students will make new friends and join certain clubs34.Why does the author suggest having wine glasses and snacks handy?A.To pass the busy university life.B.To help make friends with other freshers.C.To show yourself a drinker as others.D.To pass the time in a happy way.35.The main purpose of the passage is to.A.tell the newers how to make a new start in universitiesB.introduce something about higher education system of the UKC.discuss something about the Freshers’ Week in the UKD.a(chǎn)dvise the freshmen how to behave well in the beginningCEvery American family has its own traditions on Thanksgiving Day, and mine is no the national holiday arrives, my mom rises early to make the puts a turkey in the oven, chops carrots and bakes ’m sorry to say that the men in the family – my dad, my younger brother and myself – rarely pitch in to job is to wash the mountain of dirty dishes after the meal is 2 pm every Thanksgiving Day, family members seat themselves around the kitchen of turkey, vegetables, salad, rolls and pies cover this point, we can hardly keep ourselves from drooling(流口水)all over our fancy clothes, but it’s not yet time to , we must bow our heads, close our eyes and say a prayer of thanks aloud to God for giving us everything we normal circumstances, I would have no problem making a list of things I am thankful grew up in a loving parents, who aren’t wealthy, took out loans to help me pay for , the funny thing is, every time I sit down for Thanksgiving dinner and try to say a prayer of thanks, my mind usually goes think it has something to do with my growling(咕咕叫)stomach and all of that food sitting right there under my , though, we all finish our short prayers and dig be sure, the day includes other highlights – visiting with family and watching usually around 6 pm we are all ourselves stuffed like turkeys and thankful to have a nice warm bed to sleep purpose of the text is to what the family do for Thanksgiving how the family spends Thanksgiving Day foods served on Thanksgiving the American Thanksgiving Day Thanksgiving Day the author’s family do the following except a visits a big football does the author’s mind usually “go blank” when saying a prayer of thanks? is too thankful to say a mind is