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vironment, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution, we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. What’s more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great benefit to saving energy. I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign! Li Hua [精華點評 ] 本文的難度在于如何合并信息點 , 考生需要用三個句子覆蓋五個倡議。 Dear Xiaoming, ... Yours, Li Hua [參考范文 ] Dear Xiaoming, You have told me that you are very nervous about the ing speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you fet your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours, Li Hua [精華點評 ] 建議信的寫作關(guān)鍵在于作者給出建議的語氣委婉而中肯 , 使對方容易接受。 (7) This program helps students improve their English. 合并: Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第 5個句子和第 7個句子是并列關(guān)系 , 因此我們可以用 not only...but also...這組連詞把它們連接起來