【正文】 ord which gets the greatest concern in the world. Lowcarbon life means a kind of lifestyle in which people do their best to reduce energy consumption and carbon greenhouse gas emissions. ? It is of vital importance for the whole world to practice the lowcarbon lifestyle. Firstly, our natural resources and energy are limited。判斷該詞組是否為垂懸修飾語的基本原則是看它邏輯意義上的主語是否與所在句子的主語相一致，如不一致，該狀語就成了垂懸修飾語，試以下面二句為例： ? Hearing a number of amusing stories, our visit was thoroughly enjoyable. ? To remain healthy, a balanced diet is important. 在第一句，狀語 hearing a number of amusing stories的邏輯主語并非句子主語our visit， 第二句中狀語 to remain healthy與句子主語 a balanced diet在邏輯意義也不一致。 ? 2． 用于連接并列成分的連接詞除 and 外，常見的還有 either...or..., neither...nor..., both...and..., not only...but also...等復(fù)合連詞，但必須注意其連接部分的詞性成分必須相一致。 ? 1）誤： Jogging is a more vigorous exercise than to play golf. ? 正： Jogging is a more vigorous exercise than playing golf. ? Jogging 與 playing相一致，都為動名詞，作主語。an. ? 連接成分相一致，都為介詞短語，用作狀語。這種結(jié)構(gòu)能使句子顯得嚴謹，層次分明，增強感染力。 ? ? People have tried to fight against the influence of TV mercials, but it often proves useless. ? 代詞 it 在本句中并不指代前面的單數(shù)名詞influence，而是指 to fight against the influence of TV mercials （反對電視商業(yè)廣告）的這種努力，因此應(yīng)將 it的意義具體化， ? 此句可改為： People have tried to fight against the influence of TV mercials, but this effort often proves useless. ? one 和 you用于指代意義時的不同 ? If one wants to excel in athletics, you should watch your diet. ? 此句應(yīng)把代詞 one和 you的使用統(tǒng)一起來，有兩種改法： ? If one wants to excel in athletics, he should watch his diet. ? If you want to excel in athletics, you should watch your diet. ? 一般的規(guī)則是：用于泛指意義時， 常用 he (him, his)，用于特定意義時才用 you (you, your)。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 參照辯論式議論文的寫法。 There might be some element of truth in these people?s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一個例子。注意，要改的是一些 語法或拼寫錯誤 ，而不是作內(nèi)容上的大的改動，換言之，是改一些詞或詞組，而不是改整個句子或段落，因為那樣會造成卷面混亂，導(dǎo)致低分。論證句或擴展句之間最好有連接詞，如 First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。 2） name之前應(yīng)該有冠詞 a，其實題目中都給了，結(jié)果這位同學(xué)忽略了，缺乏基本的語法意識。 內(nèi)容完整，緊扣提綱 (plete)：一般來說，四、六級寫作都會給出三點漢語提綱，考生應(yīng)嚴格按照三點寫成三段。再往后想兩條理由或例證即可。否則后果很嚴重。 8分 基本切題，表達思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫；但語言錯誤 較多，其中有少量的嚴重錯誤。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾 種分數(shù)。 （ 2） 大學(xué)英語考試作文題采用 總體評分 (Global Scoring)方法。要考慮 作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而確切地表 達思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。共分五等： 2分、 5分、 8分、 11分及 14分。 注意： 字數(shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分： 累計字數(shù)在 81~89之間，扣 1分； 累計字數(shù)在 71~80之間，扣 2分； 累計字數(shù)在 61~70之間，扣 3分； 累計字數(shù)在 51~60之間，扣 4分； 累計字數(shù)在 50以下，最多給 5分。 ? 以 20xx年 6月六級寫作真題為例。字數(shù)還是比較容易寫夠的。有能力的話再追求閃光的詞句。當(dāng)然有時候為了論證自然或擴展字數(shù)也可以加上一點鋪墊的句子。如有同學(xué)寫 09年真題第一段時寫道： Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 這樣的作文倒是沒有語言錯誤，但肯定也得不了高分。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第一個原因。 By saying that, they mean 對這個觀點的進一步解釋。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly bee a mon concern of the public). According to a survey, 調(diào)查內(nèi)容說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。 therefore, it is absolutely necessary for us to save and protect them. Secondly, in order to protect our environment from serious greenhouse effect, we need a lowcarbon emission. It is lowcarbon life that enables our next generations to live a better and superior life. ? What we should bear in mind is that the earth is mon home. Thus, every one is well advised to practice this lifestyle and there are several ways for us to do this. Firstly, every one is expected to cultivate their awareness of saving energy. Then, we are also hoped to help our families and friends to live a lowcarbon life. Only by doing so can we hope to create a world where all humans enjoy a clean and tidy environment. (185words) ? 第一課 指代（ Reference） ? ? 在同一句中，代詞與其指代的前述名詞應(yīng)在人稱、數(shù)、格上保持一致。因此這兩個狀語詞組都成了各自句中的垂懸修飾語，在意義上是錯誤的，改正的方法有二： ? 1．修飾主句中的主謂語部分，使與修飾語邏輯上的主語一致起來。 ? 1）誤： I hope either to spend my vacation in Beijing or Xi39。 。 ? 正： I hope to spend my vacation either in Beijing or in Xi39。 ? Since we heard a number of amusing stories, our visit was thoroughly enjoyable. ? If a person is to remain healthy, a balanced diet is important. ? 下面列舉四種形式的垂懸修飾語及兩種修改的辦法： ? 1．分詞短語 ? 誤： Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eyes can reach. ? 正： Lookin