【正文】 e years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。文章是按照時間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌，這一部分使用了過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞都變成了過去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。注意:。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點齊全，語言簡練。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。根據(jù)題目要求可知，人稱以第三人稱為主。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料，在描寫外貌和性格時，會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點；還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來改善污染，城市變得越來越整潔。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因為可以把自己的知識分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。請為你身邊的人或事點贊，讓“點贊”成為傳遞正能量的一種行動吧！是什么行為讓你點贊？講述一件你點贊的事情。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。2．書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。at 5 o’clock大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。do what we want, such as listening to musicclock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。2. 介紹你平時鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時間：不到一個半小時。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/h