【正文】 ____________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic ?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。9．書面表達(dá)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。【詳解】本篇作文要求作者就上網(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。【詳解】文章需要介紹下中國的文化。開頭介紹了我最大的個人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。 2. 陳述自己的理由。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。短文開頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。at 5 o’clockTime to leave schoolActivities to do after school...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some stud