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為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel(爭(zhēng)吵) with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求:語(yǔ)言要通順,表達(dá)要正確。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫具體,條理清晰。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整,文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表,補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容,從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面,對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)??梢赃m當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn),并表達(dá)自己的看法。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信給Danny。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let herhave more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。s best to do sth.)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如hold a class meeting,talk about,the result of,keep healthy,after school,have more time to do,want to do,such as,listen to music,in favor of,clean the room,play tennis等。...最新九年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)及其解題技巧及練習(xí)題(含答案)一、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1.書面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上,同學(xué)們對(duì)“初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適?”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。exercise to keep healthy and read books而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39?,F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操,多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點(diǎn)… ….(至少一條)參考詞匯:近視的 shortsighted要求:(1)詞數(shù):80~100個(gè)。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)有:sb. spend some time doing sth.,in order to do sth.,try to do sth.,the importance of…等。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some allA students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:When I was……,my mother always read……,Gradually I began to……,Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久,文化各異;傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,多彩習(xí)俗(舉一例)文明行為相互尊重,以禮相待;互學(xué)共鑒,共同成長(zhǎng)(或自擬)身邊文明校園文明(自擬一點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主,首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求,對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括,去粗取精;在寫作時(shí)目的要明確,要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性。贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙(be cheated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容,而是用圖表的形式,列出了寫作的提綱。文章條理清晰,有層次。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful l