【正文】 he bottom of your , you will leave a good impression on their must appreciate for we all know that there is easy for us to own happiness as long as you can contribute , everyone has their own are children in our we do some housework, our parents will own the sense of they think you grew we will find that their happiness from our , we also gain happiness from our a word, if you want to gain happiness, you should contribute something firstly.第三篇：歷年四級(jí)寫(xiě)作真題專(zhuān)四輔導(dǎo)之便條寫(xiě)作（一）便條的寫(xiě)作便條是一種簡(jiǎn)單的書(shū)信形式。但一般不寫(xiě)年份，因?yàn)楸銞l的內(nèi)容多半是當(dāng)日或近日內(nèi)要辦的事情。3)Catch on the lesson after returning 5th Dear Miss Huang, My sister called me last night, and she said that my father is dangerously beg to apply for seven days’ leave of absence from 16th to 21st instant, in order that I can see my beloved should be much obliged if you would grant me my regards the lessons to be missed during my absence, I will do my best to make up for them as soon as I get back from yours， I should be much obliged if you would...是一種客套語(yǔ)，表示“……，我當(dāng)不勝感激。例1 Directions: You have missed a date of your friend, now you have to write a letter for appologization in about 100 20th Dear Lily, I am sorry I missed seeing you know that you must have been also feel worried and anxious in my fact is that my manager at the last moment asked me to prepare a urgent plan while I could not get to a phone to call you and yesterday I have worked late until about 8:30 am terribly , I would like to ask you out this weekend to make up for give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply. 臨時(shí)有事未能赴約，一定要把事情解釋清楚并真誠(chéng)的道歉，最好能有彌補(bǔ)（to make up），邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方周末再碰頭（I would like to ask you out this weekend）注意句子you must have been disappointed中情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的用法：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+完成時(shí)態(tài)，表示過(guò)去行為?！坝绊憽庇幸粋€(gè)很地道的短語(yǔ)。t be able to go to dance with you this weekend．My mother is suddenly taken ill．In order not to disappoint you，I have asked Shi Dai to take my place．She is a better dancer，I think．My regrets．Joe 從便條中可看出，英語(yǔ)表達(dá)先“果”—I won39。m terribly sorry I wasn39。an, Chengdu , shanghai , Wuhan, nanjing ,and results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow39。(Global Scoring)方法。該給低分的給低分，包括0分。5分：基本切題。14分：切題。其中9分的得分率為60分(相當(dāng)于百分制的60 分)。二、寫(xiě)作命題預(yù)測(cè)作文的命題，仍會(huì)堅(jiān)持“穩(wěn)中求變”的命題原則。，但避免大量使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，堅(jiān)持“內(nèi)容決定形式”的寫(xiě)作原則，切忌為了湊字?jǐn)?shù)而胡亂堆砌關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)。再次，“連貫性好”。作文“四步定位法”的步驟可以簡(jiǎn)單地概括 為：“一定中心，二定方法，三定結(jié)構(gòu)，四定句式”。所以，寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文時(shí)，一定要時(shí)刻提醒自己盡量避免中文思維，先表明觀點(diǎn)，再 論證或說(shuō)明。2).有人認(rèn)為電子圖書(shū)會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)圖書(shū)，理由是?? 3).我的看法。這樣做，不但會(huì)影響文章的中心思想，而且也會(huì)讓人覺(jué)得晦澀難懂。(略)要靈活運(yùn)用四種句子結(jié)構(gòu)——簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句和拓展句，長(zhǎng)短句要合理相間，發(fā)揮短句表達(dá)有力(多用作結(jié)論)、長(zhǎng)句邏輯嚴(yán)密(多用于論證或 說(shuō)明)的特點(diǎn)，切忌采取單一句式。另外，還要注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的正確使用。例如：I had heard the rumor before。因此，可以確定出如下的結(jié)構(gòu)：第一部分，解釋電子圖書(shū)越來(lái)越多的現(xiàn)象，理論歸因?yàn)椤靶畔⒓夹g(shù)的發(fā)展”，并舉例說(shuō)明其“越來(lái)越多”，通過(guò)講道理和擺事實(shí)拓展提綱的第一點(diǎn)。(convenient and accessible。只有這樣“有形加無(wú)形”，才能以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變，輕松應(yīng)對(duì)考試。disadvantages of traditional booksExamples: read online without payment。整個(gè)提綱都沒(méi)有涉及到“解決問(wèn)題”部分。再者，一句話(huà)中最好不要使用逗號(hào)表示多個(gè)層次的并列，避免造成讀者理解上的困難。這里所說(shuō)的“一句話(huà)”，其標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是指以句號(hào)、問(wèn)號(hào)、分號(hào)、感嘆號(hào) 結(jié)尾的句子。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，一篇完整的四級(jí)應(yīng)試作文應(yīng)該包括三個(gè)部分，即：提出問(wèn)題、分析問(wèn)題和解決問(wèn)題，也就是要回答“是什么、為什么 和怎么樣”三個(gè)問(wèn)題。再次，每句話(huà)也應(yīng)該而且只能有一個(gè)中心，而且要避免啰唆和重復(fù)。具體而言，在四級(jí)作文中，就是圍繞提綱的中心以段落的形式對(duì)它 進(jìn)行豐富和發(fā)展。簡(jiǎn)單而言，就是西方人更習(xí)慣于先結(jié)論后解釋或論證，中國(guó)人習(xí)慣于先解釋或論證逐漸得出結(jié)論。(一)寫(xiě)作“四步定位法”介紹根據(jù)多年英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，筆者認(rèn)為自己所創(chuàng)的“定位法”仍是獲得應(yīng)試作文高分的一種捷徑，特別適合于應(yīng)對(duì)四、六級(jí)和考研作文。其次，“表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順”。，避免句式單一或句式復(fù)雜。，圖表提綱為輔。③如要判為0分，須慎重處理。11分：切題。若認(rèn)為所閱文章稍?xún)?yōu)或稍劣于該分 數(shù)則可加1分(即9分)或減1分(即7分)。能掌握基本的寫(xiě)作技能。t think is your opinion？A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television 2000 College life should be varied and extracurricular activities are an important aspect of ，at present，there is much room for improvement in this an article to the university radio entitled：The importance of extracurricular activities 2001 Travel has bee part of our more and more of us have e to know the significance of travel through our own experience：Travel broadens the mind 2002 Nowadays people are being increasingly aware of the importance of they have different ways to stay example，some exercise every day； others try to keep a balanced do you think is the best way to stay healthy？The Best Way to Stay Healthy 2003People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever on answer sheet one a position of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of Keeping A Good Mood 2004Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each , some say that phones will kill letter is your opinion? Write on answer sheet one a position of about 150 words on the following topic: Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? 2005The students39。專(zhuān)業(yè)四級(jí)便條寫(xiě)作范例： note of Invitation Dear :Will you and be able to join us and a couple of friends on Saturday evening, October 5th, for dinner? Later we plan to go to the City39。比如寫(xiě)下面一則便條，因母親突然生病，周末你不能和湯姆去跳舞了，你找了舞跳得很好的時(shí)黛來(lái)代替你，并表示抱歉。與別人已經(jīng)定好的約會(huì)卻臨時(shí)不能赴約時(shí)，應(yīng)說(shuō)明原因并誠(chéng)懇地道歉，以期獲得別人的諒解。此類(lèi)信要寫(xiě)得及時(shí)，態(tài)度要誠(chéng)懇，用詞需謙遜。例2 Directions: Your father is seriously ill, and you want to go back a note to the secretary and it should include 1)the cause for leaving。結(jié)尾時(shí)也無(wú)需要結(jié)尾禮詞，只需要寫(xiě)上便條者姓名。“變”是指作文的考查形式會(huì)變，不但其文體會(huì)變，而且考查的具體內(nèi)容必然會(huì)變。作文分15 14 得分率100 94 8754 4734 20 7（二)評(píng)分剖析對(duì)研究《大綱》關(guān)于寫(xiě)作部分的要求、評(píng)分原則和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，寫(xiě)作的得分是一種綜合分?jǐn)?shù)。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。5分：基本切題。第一篇：四級(jí)真題寫(xiě)作命題剖析與預(yù)測(cè)四級(jí)真題寫(xiě)作命題剖析與預(yù)測(cè)收集整理：肖慶華 陳明一、寫(xiě)作命題剖析（一)大綱要求根據(jù)全國(guó)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試委員會(huì)2006年11月公布的《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試大綱（2006年修訂版)》（以下均簡(jiǎn)稱(chēng)《大綱》)，寫(xiě)作（writing)部分是測(cè)試學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)的能力，所占分值比例為15%，考試時(shí)間為30分鐘。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而合適地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。：2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。14分：切題。其中9分的得分率為60分（相當(dāng)于百分制的60分)?！胺€(wěn)”是指作文考查的目的不變，仍以測(cè)試考生基本的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力為主；考查的內(nèi)容不變，仍側(cè)重于思想表達(dá)、篇章組織、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用、寫(xiě)作格式四個(gè)方面。一般不寫(xiě)地址，與普通書(shū)信基本相同。因病請(qǐng)假則是ask for sick ，文中用的短語(yǔ)是apply for意為“申請(qǐng)”，含有更加鄭重的意味，常用于下級(jí)對(duì)上級(jí)或晚輩對(duì)長(zhǎng)輩的書(shū)面語(yǔ)中，“Only child”意為“獨(dú)生子女”相應(yīng)的，“獨(dú)生女”譯作“only daughter”而“獨(dú)生子”譯作“only son”.As concern as后面跟名詞性結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“涉及到，至于”與Concerning同義，兩者可以互換。為了避免誤解，不影響感情，在這種情況下，應(yīng)寫(xiě)信給對(duì)方予以解釋?zhuān)哉?qǐng)求諒解。美國(guó)人通常說(shuō)to call somebody。便條寫(xiě)作中的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)：中國(guó)人與西方人看問(wèn)題的方法的確在許多方面存在著差異，而且這種差異的的確確在束縛著中國(guó)學(xué)生，成為他們英文寫(xiě)作中的攔路虎，使他們不能準(zhǔn)確而簡(jiǎn)潔地表達(dá)思想。）所以說(shuō)，大學(xué)生用英文寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要按照英美人的思維模式進(jìn)行思考，避免寫(xiě)出中國(guó)式的英語(yǔ)。s Union to write a passage entitled： The Main Difference