【正文】 concern as后面跟名詞性結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“涉及到，至于”與Concerning同義，兩者可以互換。便條具有用途廣泛、形式簡單、文字要求不十分嚴格的特點。一般不寫地址，與普通書信基本相同。要求考生仔細閱讀和分析所給的情景，確定便條所涉及的內(nèi)容，如寫便條者與便條接收者的身份、兩者之間的關(guān)系及情景的正式程度等。“穩(wěn)”是指作文考查的目的不變，仍以測試考生基本的書面表達能力為主；考查的內(nèi)容不變，仍側(cè)重于思想表達、篇章組織、語言運用、寫作格式四個方面。，有時會考些簡單的應(yīng)用文，且多以信函為主。其中9分的得分率為60分（相當(dāng)于百分制的60分)。CET4 110119 100109 90998089707960695059＜49 CET6 140149 130139 120129 110119 100109 90998089＜79 扣分9(注：①如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結(jié)束句，均不得計入所寫字數(shù)。14分：切題。8分：基本切題。：2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。評分標準：。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而合適地表達思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分（Reward Scores), 而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。第一篇：四級真題寫作命題剖析與預(yù)測四級真題寫作命題剖析與預(yù)測收集整理：肖慶華 陳明一、寫作命題剖析（一)大綱要求根據(jù)全國大學(xué)英語四、六級考試委員會2006年11月公布的《大學(xué)英語四級考試大綱（2006年修訂版)》（以下均簡稱《大綱》)，寫作（writing)部分是測試學(xué)生用英語進行書面表達的能力，所占分值比例為15%，考試時間為30分鐘。（結(jié)構(gòu)也很重要）。：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。5分：基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。表達思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。②規(guī)定的內(nèi)容未寫全者，按比例扣分。作文分15 14 得分率100 94 8754 4734 20 7（二)評分剖析對研究《大綱》關(guān)于寫作部分的要求、評分原則和標準，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，寫作的得分是一種綜合分數(shù)。圖表提綱為輔?！白儭笔侵缸魑牡目疾樾问綍?，不但其文體會變，而且考查的具體內(nèi)容必然會變。便條的特點在于內(nèi)容簡短，大多是臨時性的詢問、留言、通知、要求等。結(jié)尾時也無需要結(jié)尾禮詞，只需要寫上便條者姓名。基本寫作格式便條內(nèi)容和類型不盡相同，可以靈活變通。例2 Directions: Your father is seriously ill, and you want to go back a note to the secretary and it should include 1)the cause for leaving。2)約請(Invitation)Directions: You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is visiting and you want to give it to your friend a note to her and say: 1)the time of the show, 2)the place where you will wait for Dear Alice, Here is a piece of good news for Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is now on a visit in Beijing, will give a performance in the Beijing Grand Theater tomorrow am sure that you will be happy to watch I leave you an admission performance will begin at seven o’clock will wait for you at the theater let me know whether you are prevented from ing or not. 約朋友一起去看戲，可是朋友不在家，只好留下票子和一張便條，但又怕朋友來不了，所以在便條最后特地寫上“如果你來不了，告訴我一聲”（Please let me know whether you are prevented from ing）3)道歉（Apology）人非圣賢，孰能無過。此類信要寫得及時，態(tài)度要誠懇，用詞需謙遜。例2 Directions: You have received a invitation from your friend, but you have already had some guests in your express the reason you can’t go clearly in about 100 Dear Lucy, I do apologize for having to send this letter about Saturday I accepted your invitation, I simply forgot that Saturday was a holiday and that my own guests were not leaving until Sunday is difficult for me to make a I also wonder to meet you very could not very well go out by myself and leave the guests at my hope you know how sorry I am not to be with you this I make a visit to you in my other spare time? Thank you very much. 自己家里有客人，自然不方便再接受別人邀請去做客所以可以明正言順的表示拒絕或可另約時間。與別人已經(jīng)定好的約會卻臨時不能赴約時，應(yīng)說明原因并誠懇地道歉，以期獲得別人的諒解。5）回復(fù)友人問候(Reply for Regards)Directions: You have just had an operation, and received a note of regards from your friend please write a reply to her to tell her your current Jenny, Thanks for your letter of sympathy I received the day before operation on my leg was a wonderful know I had been suffering a lot from my leg since my operation removed the cause of is quite worth having the am daily recovering from my ’m confident I will soon be in the office again after proper you for kind best wishes to all your family 這是對好友問候便條的回復(fù)。比如寫下面一則便條，因母親突然生病，周末你不能和湯姆去跳舞了，你找了舞跳得很好的時黛來代替你，并表示抱歉。一般來說，在單個句子中，英語句子也是先中心，也就是將主要思想、結(jié)果放在句首，放在主句里表達；而漢語正相反，一般為后中心，主要的觀點、信息往往放在句末。專業(yè)四級便條寫作范例： note of Invitation Dear :Will you and be able to join us and a couple of friends on Saturday evening, October 5th, for dinner? Later we plan to go to the City39。s my fault, so 1 wish you can forgive I will try to avoid such Note of Appointment Dear Betty，I wonder if I could see you in your office tomorrow, at 10: have many problems to talk over with you on my current makes me very I hope you could give me some good give me a phone call and let me know whether it is ok, or when you are Note of Congratulations Dear Jacky, I am so glad to hear that you won the first place in the National English Debating !How great you are!You set a good example for of our class are proud of you excellent I want to share your can talk with me in 39。t think is your opinion？A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television 2000 College life should be varied and extracurricular activities are an important aspect of ，at present，there is much room for improvement in this an article to the university radio entitled：The importance of extracurricular activities 2001 Travel has bee part of our more and more of us have e to know the significance of travel through our own experience：Travel broadens the mind 2002 Nowadays people are being increasingly aware of the importance of they have different ways to stay example，some exercise every day； others try to keep a balanced do you think is the best way to stay healthy？The Best Way to Stay Healthy 2003People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever on answer sheet one a position of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of Keeping A Good Mood 2004Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each , some say that phones will kill letter is your opinion? 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