【正文】 hour of the the corner of the street near my school，I abruptly bumped into a man and，worse luck，broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology，I just kept on running and long last，I arrived at the school only to find，with great sadness mixed with some relief，that the school was empty and the classrooms were all was ill luck showed no sign of ing to an I returned home greatly frustrated，I found myself locked my hurry I had forgotten to bring the key with my luck!【點評】這篇文章按照時間順序一氣呵成。參考范文Last night I was driving home from had an was following behind a truck，driving at about 30 kilometers an was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting a small girl ran onto the road from the was chasing a dog and she wasn’t paying any attention to the immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my I did not hit her，but I hit a car ing in the other I was not driving very fast so the damage was not is better to damage a car than to injure a young child，I thought to ： 以第一人稱寫一篇記敘文，講述在旅行中經(jīng)歷的一件小事。以“Goals”為題打開一篇說明文的思路。請看上述范文第二段：“For instance”引出“l(fā)ifetime goals”的實例，如，贏得研究獎金、出版有影響書或文章、獲得大學的系主任職位、獲得國家自然科學基金及大公司穩(wěn)定的顧問職位。：CET4：the Olympic Games：a skeleton in the cupboard：Hope Project：qualifications：：教育的重要性：當前網(wǎng)絡游戲的危害：成功的方法：健身的種種看法：大學生學好英語的方法：：社會實踐的方面：課外活動：大學生談戀愛的原因：大學畢業(yè)生的分配情況：食堂的伙食：：留學的利弊：兼職的好壞：不同的減肥方法：題海戰(zhàn)術與素質(zhì)教育：：大學生的身體狀況：大學生的就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀：汽油價格上漲帶來的影響：手機的使用情況：中國人住房狀況：借助說明文的構(gòu)思方法，看看下列題目該如何寫：(1)The Layout of a HospitalDirection： You are asked to write a position about “The Layout Of a Hospital”。Where：到哪兒散步?去公園?在校園里?在街上(街上空氣不好，還是不去!)?！癆 Most Unlucky Day”為題，想想該怎么寫。it was dark。文章開篇指明該鐘位于英國倫敦，且全世界的人們通過BBC就能夠聽到鐘聲。在未來社會發(fā)展的素質(zhì)教育發(fā)揮重要作用。在我看來，在兼職的部分原因在于減輕學生經(jīng)濟負擔，特別是那些來自貧困家庭。另一方面，因為他們希望找到一份稱心如意的工作，在未來，他們還是有可能實現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)型。巨大的變化，在我看來，人的根本轉(zhuǎn)變的信號，是對家庭和婚姻的視圖。首先，大學生干部修養(yǎng)不夠好。其次，人們將失去創(chuàng)造的沖動是否有剽竊這里和那里。讓，是以英語學習為例。（9）Whenever we talk to others , we should not hesitate to plain in two ,if a matter is not done properly , we should ,the wrong practice will go on and on , until it bees such a serious matter that nobody can overlook it any make matters worse,the most appropriate time for solving the problem may have ,if the matter is dishonest or even report to the police , or it will harm the interest of other people or even the whole people don,t plain when they should ,mainly for two most cases ,they put up with the wrongdoings because the matter is not too is also likely that they do not want to seem to make fuss about trivial ,when they choose not to plain , they do nothing to prevent wrongdoings from people don,t plain when they should ,illegal actions even crimes will be on the one of us should learn to form the habit of plaining whenever necessary每當我們同別人談話，我們應當毫不猶豫地抱怨在兩種情況。neverthless，當他們選擇時，不要抱怨，他們從spresding做什么能阻止不法行為。t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of lies in perseverance and selfconfidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound 。在大多數(shù)情況下，他們把不法行為，因為這件事并不太嚴重。當他們在國際比賽中贏大獎時，我們都很興奮，但他知道經(jīng)歷了多少艱辛？從上面的例子來看，我們完全可以得出結(jié)論：不勞而不獲。（7）No pain, no gainsThe wellknown proverb “no pains ,no gains ”has been accepted by all of tells us that we have to make efforts whenever we want to be successful in a certain ,s take English study as an we want to improve our listening ability , we have to keep on listening to different materials and make records from time to is also true with spoken to teachers attentively in class and reading books are far from enough –you should practice talking with partners every good case in point is is born a good acrobat, and one can only bee a skilled one after countless of us excited when they win grand prizes in international petitions, but who knows how many hardships they have endured?Judging from the examples given above, we may safely e to the conclusion that no pains, no why not try our best to learn our specially well? I am sure we will bee experienced and skilled if we never give ，沒有收益 著名諺語“不勞而不獲”我們已被接受。在我看來，他們的危害可以概括成以下三個方面。這一奇怪現(xiàn)象不僅揭示了年輕人的不成熟，但還披露，這些干部還沒，沒意識到學生的性質(zhì)，聯(lián)盟。第二，當前社會是一個競爭激烈的地方到處發(fā)生，許多年輕人可以，t和贏了，結(jié)婚前他們開始有前途。許多人認為不然。因為年輕人傾向于接受新事物，很多大學生聘請這些工作。因此，學校更加重視培養(yǎng)學生的品德教育。所以，說明文的思路要圍繞說明順序、事物的特點和細節(jié)展開。根據(jù)以下提示敘述一場交通事故：1)用第一人稱。當然，由這個題目可以令人想到很多東西，因篇幅所限，我們做了刪減。對于“An Early Morning Walk”，知道命題要求后，我們就要開始構(gòu)思了。(1)Lifetime goals should be written out.(2)Like lifetime goals，these are measurable and clearly stated.(3)These goals are more performance oriented，and they help with achievement of intermediate (statistics)數(shù)字法是運用數(shù)據(jù)來表明事物的本質(zhì)和特點，準確合理的數(shù)據(jù)使文章精確可信。(2)Intermediate goals relate to outes during the next few years.(3)Shortterm goals involve outes expected during the next 12 (illustration)舉例法就是舉出實際事例來說明事物的方法，是最常見，往往也是最有效的闡釋模式。接下來講述了“大本鐘”的由來，特點——不僅外型巨大，而且走時準確，在結(jié)尾處講了“大本鐘”的一個幽默的小插曲——油漆工把油漆桶掛在指針上，把鐘弄慢了。a small girl chased a dog。注意：題目的中心詞是“unlucky”。Who：在公園里看到晨練的人：中老年人、年輕人、小孩子。第一篇：2012英語四級寫作輔導記敘文的思路與練習記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷和事物的發(fā)展變化過程為主要表現(xiàn)形式的一種文體。Where：到哪兒散步?去公園?在校園里?在街上(街上空氣不好，還是不去!)?！癆 Most Unlucky Day”為題，想想該怎么寫。it was dark。文章開篇指明該鐘位于英國倫敦，且全世界的人們通過BBC就能夠聽到鐘聲。此法的句型：① ? is a/the ? of ? which/that ?② ? relate to/involve/refer to ?【例】(1)Language is a system of arbitrary vocal symbols which is used for human 。如：上述范文對三種人生目標在時間上和實際操作上進行了比較，并闡明了彼此的聯(lián)系?！纠克募壙荚囍校怀霈F(xiàn)過一次專門的記敘文體裁的寫作，即“An Early Morning Walk”(.)，2003年6月出現(xiàn)過包含記敘文的作文，即“An EyeWitness Account of a Traffic Accident”。一日之際在于晨，背背書，讀讀單詞。故事從作者醒來開始，在慌慌張張中煎蛋卷、趕地鐵、急奔學校、撞破眼鏡、發(fā)現(xiàn)白忙乎了一場，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了鑰匙!整個故事描述得精彩生動，既有動作的細節(jié)又有作者內(nèi)心的感受，讓讀者也身臨其境地體會了倒霉的一天。說明文必須按一定的順序進行說明：時間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序或認識順序，選擇具體的特點和細節(jié)來說明。我們很難想象一個不錯的社會和諧。(2)New Part JobsWith the rapid development of information society , a large number of new parttime jobs emerge ,such as cyber writers , shooter rectifiers and so young people tend to accept new thing ,many university students employ these ,some are