【正文】 in sport their minds, sport exercise is very important to our for me, I will go to the one hand, I want to refresh my spirit and prepare a good mood for the next the other hand, I can experience some country culture and get close to a word, I will try my best to make my holiday wishes!Yours,Monica【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】這封信按照要求將每條都寫全了，行文流暢，思路很清晰，并將自己的暑期安排以及理由寫出來了，用到了短語On one hand，On the other hand，使文章條理很清楚。請(qǐng)看一個(gè)結(jié)尾段的例子：題目：Helping Each Other Makes the world WonderfulHello, ’m ’s nice to talkabout help our life we often help others and also get help from we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our we give a hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of we know, patients need help we help them, happiness es to others is especiallyimportant in our ：I think we get much when we help the people around the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.”最后，有了積累，有了欣賞之后，我們得練筆。作文框架作文一般框架：要點(diǎn)+結(jié)構(gòu)+邏輯+語法+亮點(diǎn) 1 要點(diǎn)實(shí)際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個(gè)字，翻譯！因?yàn)橹锌加⒄Z寫作一般會(huì)給出幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。最常用的就是表示遞進(jìn)的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。所以，以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。both?and。because of?。(in order)to?。but。last but not least。affect。be good at。personally。in a way。第四至九句為擴(kuò)展句，說明和支持本段的主題。他這么做實(shí)在是太愚蠢了。（sports meeting）天安門前有很多人在跳舞。雨下的很大，以致我們都不能回家。)5).That is why + 句子 那是?的原因6).That is because + 句子 那是因?yàn)?7).It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說?It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報(bào)道?8).There is no doubt that + 句子 毫無疑問?9).It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫無疑問10).There is no need to do 沒必要做?11).There is no point in doing 做某事毫無意義 is known to all, +句子 眾所周知as we all know, +句子 據(jù)我們所知it is generally/ publicly known / considered that?, 眾所周知had better(not)do 最好(不)做how about / what about doing ?怎么樣?I think you should do 我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該?I suggest / advice that you should do 我建議你做?If I were you, I would do? 我要是你的話，我會(huì)做?It’s best to do 最好做?Why not do / why don’t you do?? 為什么不? / love doingenjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜歡做?be keen on n/doing 喜歡做?prefer to do A rather than do B 寧愿做A也不愿做Bbe interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing4.?！?? so ? that ? 如此? 以至于?這部電影如此無聊，很少有人喜歡看。大明家有6口人。我們有必要多做運(yùn)動(dòng)。，共七句。as we know。as a student。lose oneself in?。 sb.。in a word。would rather do?than do?。表示目的的：so that?。表示原因的：because。so that To one’s surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately? in a word/in all 議論文常用連接詞表示并列：either?or。亮點(diǎn)如果A篇只用了beautiful,goodlooking，B篇卻用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我堅(jiān)信正常人都會(huì)給B篇高分的。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話。解題方法 1 做題步驟 審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)； 列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容； 寫作：在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)； 復(fù)查：2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等問題；2遍不出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等； 謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。當(dāng)然，出乎意料的結(jié)尾如果有助于深化主題也是可取的，有時(shí)簡短的一句話也可以結(jié)束全文。⒊ 比較對(duì)比概念：the way, just as, while ,however, on the other spite of, instead.⒋ 表結(jié)果：as a result, therefore, in this way.⒌ 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)： generally speaking, in my view, in my believeTo my knowledgefrom my point of viewI meanthat is to sayin other wordsit seems to me that⒍ 舉例：for examplefor instanceas an