【正文】 heir studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。現(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時(shí)間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點(diǎn)… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。你們學(xué)校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試2. 我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；……要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；2. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進(jìn)行介紹。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。要點(diǎn)如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。Hello!Dear Amy, t