【正文】 【點睛】好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循書信格式，選用恰當?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標點正確，用詞恰當。內(nèi)容要點：1. 你是家里的獨生子/女，一直覺得很孤獨；2. 去年你家里來了一位交換生，你很開心；3. 他/她非?；顫娍蓯郏d趣廣泛；4. 你們一起生活、學習，你跟他她學會了很多東西，尤其是英語提高了很多；5. 你對這段經(jīng)歷的感受……參考詞匯： exchange student交換生，joy（n.）歡樂， on one’s own initiative主動地寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實姓名和學校名；2. 包含以上所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清楚4. 詞數(shù)80100。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。他們會感謝你的幫助。這幾天我大部分時間都在復習考試。認為閱讀材料，認真審題，確定主題，認真閱讀所給提示，所給提示就是本文的提綱要點，根據(jù)要點適當發(fā)揮，列出提綱?？蛇m當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。8．書面表達 假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Alex來信說他要來中國做交換生。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復雜結(jié)構(gòu)。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。用了because引導的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。注意闡明觀點列舉理由時，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫作條理清晰，語言表達準確，是一篇不錯的文章。寫在橫線上。C think over意思是“仔細考慮”。整篇文章時態(tài)是以現(xiàn)在時為主，故wanted不可選，其它兩個選項無此用法。D too…to…為固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意思是“太……而不能……”。C a good chance to do it 這里的to do it是不定式做后置定語。 C. big cities C. better D. am wanting( ). on　 C. whether B. enough D. with that( )3. A. to pass C. in school There is a holiday next week and I can39?！窘滩睦洹?1. Money and fame don39。Chinese CafeMondaySaturday Lunch12:0014:00 Lunch $6 (Under10 $4) Take Away$5 Each Box(Put whatever you want into one box)MondayThursday Evening17:0023:00 Dinner $11(Under10 $6) Eat InAll you can eat amp。(中考不直接考查)【教材例句】 1. When I got to school, I realized that I had left my backpack at home. 當我到學校時，我意識到我把背包忘在家里了。s only eight miles and I could get there__12__about two hours. After thinking it __13__, I am sure that this is a __14__ time for the seashore than __15__.( )1. A. at home B. doing that D. asking( )4. A. the north girl B. go to B. shall want D. under( ). in　 B. the mountainsA 根據(jù)下文的I can work at home all the rest of the time 可判斷這里是at home。5．go to the moutains意為“去爬山”，go和arrive都是不及物動詞，后跟名詞作賓語時需加介詞；leave意為“離開”，與句意不符。12．四、短文改錯。In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then