【正文】 該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。：短語：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn)）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。你的計(jì)劃? （至少一個(gè)）？（請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充）注意：（1）郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)（2）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分注：社會(huì)實(shí)踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。【點(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________