【正文】 ter (38,000 units on average) than in summer (18,000 units on average), although both of them are uneven during the day. In winter, electricity consumption peaks at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it touches the bottom at 0:00 am and 8:00 am. In contrast, the summer summits e later than winter ones at 2:00 pm and 11:00 pm. A nadir is seen nearly 9:00 am and a lower stationary phase is witnessed from 4:00pm to 9:00pm. occupy ? be shared by ? account for ? be responsible for ? be in charge of ? be in the charge of Percentage ? a small percentage of … (20%) ? a quarter of … ? the minority of … (40%) ? half of … ? the majority of … (60%) ? three quarters of … ? most of … (80%) ? onefifth / onethird Structures ? 1 occupies / accounts for the majority of A (x%). ? y% of A is shared by / is in the charge of 2. ? 3 and 4 are responsible for / in charge of the rest, with z% and w% respectively. Chart 2 (Band ) ? The pie graph demonstrates that heating rooms and water occupies the majority of electricity consumption(%). Then, % of the electricity demand is shared by ovens, kettles and washing machines. Lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools are responsible for the rest, with 15% each. Chart 2 ?The pie graph demonstrates that the majority of electricity consumption (%) is shared by heating rooms and water. Then, ovens, kettles and washing machines occupy % of the electricity demand. The rest is in the charge of lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools, with 15% each. Comparison (Band ) ? What is also worth mentioning is that heating rooms and water is the reason for the higher electricity demand in winter than in summer, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole. Comparison ? What is also worth mentioning is that electricity for heating rooms and water is probably the major cause for the higher electricity demand in winter than in summer, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole. I4 – 164 ? TA ? Comparison within / between the charts ? Confusing time expressions ? CC ? Poor paragraphing ? LR amp。 dollar ? No parison ? CC ? No reference ? LR amp。Academic Writing Task 1 2 IELTS Writing ? Saturday / Thursday Morning ? 3rd paper Test 3 Question Booklet ? Task 1 ? Report (Academic) / Letter (General) ? 150w, 20m ? Task 2 ? Essay ? 250w, 40m 4 Writing Booklet ? Writing Booklet ? ? Password: ieltswriting ? Pencil and Eraser 5 Scoring ? Examiner ? Task 1 and 2 : 0 9 ? Writing Band ? T1 * 1 / 3 + T2 * 2 / 3 ? 6 → ? Overall Band 6 Requirement ? Academic – Overall Score ? Language School ? Undergraduate 6 ? Graduate ? Famous Universities + ? Popular Majors + 7 8 9 Registration ? Objective ? An acceptable score within the shortest time ? The earlier, the more choices ! ? No deadline, no pletion ! 10 Registration ? SelfAnalysis ? NCEE 100 ? NCEE 130 or CET4 425 ? CET4 600 or CET6 425 ? CET6 600 or NETEM 70 ? 4hrs / day, 1 point / per 2 months 11 Considerate IELTS ? Test as often as possible ? Reschedule ( + 500 RMB) ? Refund ( 750 RMB) Teaching Material ? Cambridge IELTS 4 ? Cambridge IELTS 5 ? 《 雅思寫作勝經(jīng) 》 、群言出版社 12 13 Task 1 Question Grouping ? Figure (75% 20xxQ1) ? Multiple / Single ? NonFigure (25% 20xxQ1) ? Flow chart / Map 14 Writing Procedure ? Read + Plan (3 mins) ? Write (16 mins) ?