【正文】 考生可以說(shuō) He had a car, a big house and a large pany. bread car microbus/van “Mr Kong”,“teacher Kong” Confucius， a great educator in the history of China．孟子是 Mencius the boy putting sheep， the boy sending sheep, the boy MU sheep, shepherd, the little boy， 8. 主動(dòng)使用過(guò)渡詞 。 如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 卷面潦草字跡不清的文章，常常還沒有看到內(nèi)容就會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生厭惡 。 。 mutual aid (to each other) (mutual) aid to each other， (an entirely) plete confidence， repeat the question (again)， Return (back) from abroad， etc. Task1: Replace the underlined parts ? my opinion, those who are against the Inter think that it has a lot of advantages. ? From my perspective, the opponents of the Inter hold the view that it has a number of advantages. Task1: Replace the underlined parts ? general, we can safely draw the conclusion that moving to suburb is good to a city’ s growth. ? In a word, we can safely e to / arrive at the conclusion that moving to suburb benefits a city’ s development. Task1: Replace the underlined parts ? the one hand, the teacher should punish the lazy students。 但不要寫得太長(zhǎng) (四級(jí)在 120180之間；六級(jí)在 150200之間 )，否則容易引起閱卷者的反感。 9. 注意避免邏輯錯(cuò)誤。例如，在論述求知的艱難時(shí)，可引用 There is no royal road to learning. (做學(xué)問(wèn)無(wú)捷徑可 走 ) 7. 學(xué)會(huì)回避。將提綱以主題句的形式放在每段開頭表述出來(lái)，就可避免跑題 . 。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/，副詞用 increasingly. Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. ,extremely替換 very , rewarding代替 helpful ,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替 customer 15. thrilling 替換 exciting 代 but appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替 sb be interested in one39。39。 以形容詞或形容詞組開頭 Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother． →Pleased ， Mary telephoned her mother． The girl， hungry and thirsty， went back home． →Hungry and thirsty ， the girl went back home． 以副詞開頭 The child stayed there quietly． →Quietly ， the child stayed there． 以不定式開頭 He got up very early to catch the bus． →To catch the bus ， he got up very early． 以現(xiàn)在分詞或過(guò)去分詞開頭 I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winter‘ s day so long ago． →Coming home from school that dark winter ‘ s day so long ago， I was filled with anticipation． If you give me enough time， I can do it well． →Given enough time ， I can do it well． 以介詞短語(yǔ)開頭 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered it． →Like many other adventurers ， Chester had experienced fear and conquered it． 以同位語(yǔ)開頭 Sue， our monitor， always likes giving suggestions to everybody． →Our monitor ， Sue， always likes giving suggestions to everybody． 以從句開頭 Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world singlehanded． →Before he sailed round the world single handed，F(xiàn)rancis had already surprised his friends several times． You will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspection． →If you have a quality control inspection ， you will greatly improve your finished product． 3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞 ，形象具體的代替太寬泛的。四六級(jí)寫作高分策略 1..盡量避免不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤： ? 只有評(píng)卷人認(rèn)可了你語(yǔ)法掌握的水平，他才會(huì)抱著寬容甚至欣賞的態(tài)度看你的句型設(shè)計(jì)，用詞和例證的援引。 We always working till late at night before taking exams.(誤 ) We are always working (We always work) till late at night before taking exams(正 ) We should read books which may be useful to us. (正 ) We should read books may be useful to us. (誤 ) ? ? This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (誤 ) ? ?One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正 ) ?The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (誤 ) ?The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正 ) ? ? Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (誤 ) Some think that reading should be selective. (正 ) ?My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (誤 ) My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正 )