【正文】 me job——tutor an orphan.b. As for me, I managed to find a parttime job——tutor an orphan.過于絕對化a. For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.b. For example, many people had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.a. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, by ship, or by bicycle.b. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, or by ship.a. In return, I can also learn a lot from foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland.b. In return, I can also learn a lot about foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland better.a. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.b. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them of poor quality and worth nothing.a. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of all people!b. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of most people!a. Man has been able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.b. Man is able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.a. With the rapid development of our society, the campus is no longer an ivory tower.b. With the rapid development of our society, the university campus can no longer be an ivory tower.邏輯不夠嚴(yán)密a. Though it gives us more convenience, the twoday weekend has quite a few problems.b. Though it gives us more convenience, the twoday weekend has also given rise to quite a few problems.a. Of course, some people have had good luck through “l(fā)ucky numbers”, but I think that that is only a chance.b. Of course, some people think they have had good luck through “l(fā)ucky numbers”, but I think that that is only a chance.主謂一致a. But now large amounts of water and air has been polluted, which brings about various problems troubling man’s life.b. But now large amounts of water and air have been polluted, which brings about various problems troubling their life.a. My ideal job is a teacher.b. My ideal job is to be an excellent teacher.重復(fù)a. Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten man’s existence on Earth.c. Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten his existence on Earth.a. People’s opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.b. Opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.a. During the past thirty years, developing countries have been greatly developed in many aspects.b. During the past thirty years, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects.a. We may encounter some problems which need not only natural science but also social science.b. We may encounter some problems whose solution involves knowledge not only of natural science but also of social science.a. What on earth is the role money playing in our society?b. What on earth is the role money plays in our society?a. When I refresh, I will do something which I like.b. When I relax, I will do something (that) I like.C. 倒裝句a. Only in this way, you can get the true job of achieving your goals.b. Only in this way, can you get the true job of achieving your goals.D. 句子的連接與簡練句子的連接a. Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished. Then everyone will ply with this regulation.b. Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished so that everyone will ply with this regulation.a. The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.b. The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, and your process is slower and slower.a. Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.b. Community service is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.a. But in fact, there are also many people who think numbers have nothing to do with luck.b. But there are also many people who think that numbers, in fact, have nothing to do with luck.指代不明a. Sports and movies are means of relieving depression and violent emotions. This is why they are necessary in a society.b. Sports and movies are necessary in a society in order to relieve depression and violent emotions.a. Leaders of the Women’s Liberation movement have criticized American doctors severely. They are angry – and justifiably so.b. Leaders of the women’s liberation movement have criticized the medical profession severely. They are angry – and justifiably so.a. In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was suited to it.b. In the Royal Shakespear