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mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are someof my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is ing, and we must remember it39。為了進一步增強中學(xué)生的安全意識,提高自我保護能力,某校開展了以安全為主題的英語演講比賽。 第二檔(6~4分) 部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求,表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,內(nèi)容不完整。語言基本通順,語意基本連貫。使用多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯,語言通順,語意連貫,具有邏輯性。 父母的愛: 父母既要忙于工作,又要照顧我,很累; 為我提供衣食,文具書籍; 早上很早起床為我做早餐,晚上等我睡覺之后才休息; 當(dāng)我有煩惱時,耐心傾聽并提供建議; ……(自己補充,至少兩點。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。運用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想,增加作文的可讀性。揚州現(xiàn)狀美麗揚州從我做起未來展望車輛越來越多空氣越來越差……出門做公交…………水更清,天更藍(lán)………….要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下連貫;2)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名。 Bill隨著揚州經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展,私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升,同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重。 yours sincerely Hope to hear from you soon. which has a bad effect on studies. Bill參考范文:Dear headmaster, Your sincerely, 短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);參考詞匯:study efficiency 學(xué)習(xí)效率; expected 預(yù)期的;be lost in ……沉浸在……中;Dear headmaster,課間時間太短,播放音樂達(dá)不到預(yù)期效果。使大腦得到放松。假如你是比爾,你校試行在課間播放音樂,你班的同學(xué)對此進行了討論?!玖咙c說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,例如from my heart ,be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短語,文中還用到了時間狀語從句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago, ;賓語從句 I won39。Dear my teacher,Leaving you-lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won39。3.文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校。初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)和生活即將結(jié)束,你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活。開頭考試帶來的壓力的好處,接下來介紹考試壓力的不利之處,最后指出我們解決考試壓力。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:A little bit of stress can be......;it can remind us to .....;if we have......及we’d better ......等句式的應(yīng)用。愛好方面:類型、好處、時間If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.學(xué)習(xí)方面:計劃、聽課、作業(yè)其它方面:交流… …開頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上圖中的要點,可作必要的發(fā)揮;3. 條理清楚、語句連貫;4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名等信息。其實,時間就在我們的掌握之中,關(guān)鍵是能否合理利用。fromlookI2014agoodspeak.IfromaMythatwebsitehaves easy and it saves time.However, not all the students wele this. Many students think simply copying the answers won’t improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.假設(shè)你是一名中學(xué)生,名叫田梅。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要遂詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。請你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況和下列表格中的要點提不,以“Think before you search online”為題用英語寫一篇短文。其次,使用電子卡片可以節(jié)約用紙,更加環(huán)保。第二,紙質(zhì)卡片便于攜帶,可以長期保存。Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about the survey I’ve made on “Using paper cards or ecards?” in our class.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________請你給“China Daily”報社寫一封信,介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并發(fā)表你的觀點。必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)現(xiàn) 在1.你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在以My AfterSchool Activities為題舉行征文活動,請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇征文。同時運用了較復(fù)雜的句子,because、but等這些詞組的運用使句子之間銜接緊密、連貫。還有敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。However, Group B think Jane is better. It’s true that Jane’s Grades are not so good, but she is willing to do extra work for the class in her spare time.anniversary of the founding of Y