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and International. In the essay you should 1) describle the picture and interpret its meaning, and 2) give your ment on the phenomenon. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEEF 2.(20 points) 中國(guó)最龐大的下資料庫(kù) (整理 . 版權(quán)歸原作者所有 ) 第 6 頁(yè) 共 36 頁(yè) 第三部分 2020年寫(xiě)作考題評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及樣卷 76. Directions: Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to 1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below, 2) give a specific example, and 3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 中國(guó)最龐大的下資料庫(kù) (整理 . 版權(quán)歸原作者所有 ) 第 7 頁(yè) 共 36 頁(yè) 2020年作文范文 When we use the world love we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. The picture below illustrates the real maning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us bees. In fact , throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions. As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their ines are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can be it money or goods to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves. In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are farmily members or plete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for ,as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow bee, the more brightly the lamp of love shines. 樣卷的評(píng)分和評(píng)語(yǔ) Sample 1, Sample 2 給分:( 17— 20分) 中國(guó)最龐大的下資料庫(kù) (整理 . 版權(quán)歸原作者所有 ) 第 8 頁(yè) 共 36 頁(yè) 評(píng)語(yǔ):內(nèi)容切題,包括題中所列三方面的全部?jī)?nèi)容;文章通順,語(yǔ)言流暢,句式變化多樣;用詞面較寬;雖有個(gè)別不妥之處,但該生基本功較好;表達(dá)能力較強(qiáng);長(zhǎng)度符合要求。s growing human population on its wildlife. The number of people have been on the rise from 1800 to 1980. But the number of species had been on the rise from 1600 to 1900, and the species had died out since 1900. There are I think some reasons for the ups and downs of population growth. On the first place, as a people with the development of society, the standard of living conditions continues to improvement. The birth rates is increcased and the death rates is at the declined. Secondly the species, on the other hand, are lived on the rural areas. Their conditions of lives were slow and they were able to protect themselves. So species is decrease. As far as I concern, I suggest that we did our best to protect wildlife. The government should make effective measures to protect wildlife. Everyone should 中國(guó)最龐大的下資料庫(kù) (整理 . 版權(quán)歸原作者所有 ) 第 5 頁(yè) 共 36 頁(yè) educated to propect wildlife. 樣卷 5.得分 2分 From tables, we can see that the country39。s growing human population on its wildlife 2. possible reason for the effect 3. your suggestion for wildlife protection 樣卷 1.得分 14分 From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our pla. Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several possible reasons for this. First, with a rapid growth of population, more and more people came to live where some wild species have been living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably can not adapt to the new evironment and die. Second, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money. Third, with the development of the industry, the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed. The deforestration has bee more and more serious. So some of the wildlives bee homeless and extinct. In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the governments should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love nature and protect it. Third, as for ourselves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment. 樣卷 2.得分 11分 There are two graphs about the changes of population and wildlife in the . 中國(guó)最龐大的下資料庫(kù) (整理 . 版權(quán)歸原作者所有 ) 第 4 頁(yè) 共 36 頁(yè) As is seen in the graphs, with the rising of population, the number of extincted species increased. Obviously, there is a strong effect of population over the wildlife in this country. Why does is happen? I can say there are many reasons. First, man continued to hunt animals for food and money and many valuable species were killed. Second, wildlife lost their surviving space, bacause man expanded their industry at a rapid speed. More land was needed for this development As a result, wildlife has no place to live. The last reason is that the environment for wildlife has been polluted, and many species died. In my opinion, we should educate people to love the wild animals, not to kill and eat them. We also need to provide wildlife with a good living conditions. We must also lay down a law to protect the wild animals. 得卷 3.得分 8分 As is shown in the table, the number of people increased from less than one million in 1800 to 250 millon in 1990 in . According to the