【正文】 vironment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。廣東中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。第二部分：主體部分。要求：1. 詞數80120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2. 文中不能出現自己的真實姓名和所在學校名稱?！伴_心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我們獨自旅行；煩惱的是父母不予支持。最后總結并發(fā)出呼吁。t have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇開放性話題作文，針對很多人成了“手機控”這一現象，結合自己的親身經歷，談一談自己的觀點。很多人成了“手機控”。短文以一般現在時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)為主，闡明了學生們的不同觀點，以簡單句為主，也用了一些復合句，長短句結合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感，更有表現力。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。這個班會的主題是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?，對于未來的環(huán)境，很多同學吃樂觀的態(tài)度，而其他同學感到很擔心。擔心者的觀點。許多同學對未來表示樂觀，但也有些同學對未來有些擔心。高分亮點：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。某網站正在開展以“向時代楷模學習”為主題的英語征文活動。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。層次清晰，結構合理。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫、自然。寫作時應注意：首先要展開合理想象，補充文章細節(jié)內容，注意各部分內容之間的層次，內容要完整、充實，結構要清晰。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。根據上述提示，請以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。開頭介紹了王強騎車回家的路上看見一位老太太不敢過馬路，接下來介紹他主動上前攔住了車輛領著老人安全過了路口，最后我就這件事談談我的想法?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：The lady hesitated……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的應用。,可適當發(fā)揮。,所有車輛都一個接一個通過十字路口。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。然后仔細闡述了事情發(fā)生的經過。注意：詞數80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現真實的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機所困擾。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質以及對自己的應選；最后一段結尾?？梢院唵尉浣Y構為主，輔以并列句、復合句。短文應以一般現在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報的英語園地投稿。to動詞不定式結構以及序數詞的使用等，這為文章增色不少。a在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢。根據材料內容可知本文主要使用一般現在時，主語是第一人稱。提示詞語：study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,海南?？趯嶒炛袑W中考模擬）書面表達安全對于每個人都很重要。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現在時為主，謂語動詞形式準發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達習慣。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現在時為主。作文的開頭和結尾已經給出,不計入總詞數,也不必抄寫在答題卡上。4．（亮點句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學校讓學生做自愿勞動以來，在學生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論。 3．打掃教室就足夠了。 2．學生應該學會做艱苦的工作。3．（在寫作時應承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達你渴望得到他建議的心情。2．（寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性。時態(tài)為一般現在時，人稱為第一人稱。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。請簡要描述圖片內容，分析圖中現象，談談你的看法和建議，并寫一篇 110 詞左右的短文向Parents 雜志投稿，讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章有所啟發(fā)。浙江中考模擬）如今，很多父母很關心孩子的學習，想隨時監(jiān)控孩子的學習狀況如下圖中 Tony 的母親。s study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony39。s learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖畫作文，根據圖片中的相關信息介紹一下父母為了關心孩子的學習，想隨時監(jiān)控孩子的學習狀況，就這樣對嗎？仔細分析所提供的圖片內容，主要從你的看法和建議這個方面去介紹。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。提示詞語： gift, love, opinion提示問題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。 同意 ：1．多數學生是獨生子女，不會做事。 2．不是學生應該做的事情。重點詞匯及短語：argument爭論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機會；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。動詞不定式作主語，謂語動詞用單數，疑問詞+to do。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生