【正文】 ckets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。2.要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。4．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好，那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所 給要點(diǎn),寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語短文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而復(fù)雜單句結(jié)構(gòu)In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear , we are going to take some photos with our teachers and ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。參考詞匯：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..備注：詞數(shù)100左右，通知開頭已擬好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。最新英語│英語中考英語書面表達(dá)(有難度)經(jīng)典1一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1．書面表達(dá)難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 時(shí)間：6月26日下午3:00.2. 地點(diǎn):六樓會(huì)議室3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：1） 對(duì)老師用話語表達(dá)謝意；2）與同學(xué)交流自己的將來的夢(mèng)想；3）師生合影，互贈(zèng)留言等等。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。作為中學(xué)生,我們也做出了自己的努力。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。內(nèi)容包括：；（包含冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望；最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China____________________________________________