【正文】 . 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。 良好的學習習慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學習習慣， 學習才能得到提高。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問題和一些常見句式的應用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的應用，使短文內(nèi)容表達豐富。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因為你的課非常生動有趣，對我們來說學好英語很簡單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事…結構．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當我考試失敗的時候，你鼓勵我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．8．（第二部分：交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個認真工作的人。7．（【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.My classmate Bai Yang es from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students. She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇人物介紹。遼寧初三） 生活中總有些不經(jīng)意的事讓你感動，總有些平凡的人讓你難以忘記?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。學生現(xiàn)狀認為父母供他們吃好穿好是應當?shù)?，不知道感恩為什么要感恩父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；老師的授業(yè)之恩；朋友的……怎樣感恩……（至少兩點） 要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。同時語句之間使用適當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達出來。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶； ；； 。4．（第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丟了你最心愛的圖書，這是媽媽送給你的生日禮物；2. 但是Lisa并沒有因此而道歉，你很難過；3. 你喜歡閱讀，認為讀書可以開闊眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本書籍；4. 接下來你打算……參考詞匯：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes開闊眼界 要求：1. 字數(shù)80100個；2. 開頭已經(jīng)給出不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 要點齊全，行為連貫，適當發(fā)揮。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構思提綱。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。m glad to tell you there39。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復郵件?！居⒄Z】九年級下冊英語專題匯編英語英語書面表達匯編(一)含解析一、中考英語書面表達匯編1．（Dear Ben,I’m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.That’s all about our munity. I hope you will have a good time here.Yours, Li Ming【解析】試題分析：本文是要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意要寫信的格式。你的社區(qū)是什么樣的？你通常有什么活動？我怎樣和你的鄰居相處？），然后根據(jù)問題做出回答。（一）列提綱：1. 社區(qū)是什么樣的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活動do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our . 怎樣和鄰居相處kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，然后連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用。提示詞語:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。初寫短文。修改潤色。天津中考模擬）書面表達