【正文】 【英語】九年級下冊英語專題匯編英語英語書面表達匯編(一)含解析一、中考英語書面表達匯編1．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達 Hey Li Ming,I will move to your munity and stay for two months. I want to know something about your munity. What is your munity like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get along with your neighbors?Write soon!Yours,Ben假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復郵件。注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；，郵件的開頭與結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Ben,I’m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.That’s all about our munity. I hope you will have a good time here.Yours, Li Ming【解析】試題分析：本文是要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意要寫信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復郵件。動筆前要認真閱讀電子郵件，寫作時需回答郵件內所提問題，可適當發(fā)揮。仔細閱讀本的電子郵件，找出他的問題（我想了解一下你們社區(qū)的情況。你的社區(qū)是什么樣的？你通常有什么活動？我怎樣和你的鄰居相處？），然后根據問題做出回答。根據內容可知本文主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 社區(qū)是什么樣的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活動do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our . 怎樣和鄰居相處kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根據提綱連詞成句，然后連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。點睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達要符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順。（1）學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運用適當的連詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意表達的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。2．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，作為活動主持人，你打算邀請外教 Smith 先生來參加本周末學校開展的“英語戲劇展示”活動，請用英語給他寫一封邀請函，告訴他本次活動的具體時間和地點，安排了哪些內容，以及需要他做哪些事情。提示詞語:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。m glad to tell you there39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請外教史密斯先生參加英語戲劇展示活動。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。3．（天津中考模擬）書面表達 生活中好友間也會因各種原因鬧些小矛盾，當你與朋友間產生不愉快后，你會如何 處理此類問題呢？請根據以下提示點談談你的想法。1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丟了你最心愛的圖書，這是媽媽送給你的生日禮物；2. 但是Lisa并沒有因此而道歉，你很難過；3. 你喜歡閱讀，認為讀書可以開闊眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本書籍；4. 接下來你打算……參考詞匯：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes開闊眼界 要求：1. 字數80100個；2. 開頭已經給出不計入總詞數；3. 要點齊全，行為連貫，適當發(fā)揮。When I have trouble with my best friendThere are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】When I have trouble with my best friendThere are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文。【詳解】根據題干“生活中好友間也會因各種原因鬧些小矛盾，當你與朋友間產生不愉快后，你會如何 處理此類問題呢？”要求可知，本文用一般過去時，人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點題——我將介紹和好友鬧矛盾的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經過，我做了什么，為什么會和好友有矛盾。這些內容用一般過去時，注意動詞的過去式變形。1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丟了你最心愛的圖書，這是媽媽送給你的生日禮物；2. 但是Lisa并沒有因此而道歉，你很難過；3. 你喜歡閱讀，認為讀書可以開闊眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本書籍；4. 接下來你打算……第三部分：總結全文——好友之間應該互相理解。4．（廣東中考模擬）馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場“My Life At School” 主題 班會 , 邀請全班同學參加。請你根據以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶； ；； 。不開心的事情； 。未來展望1. 升上理想的學校；