【正文】 the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點?？键c：考查提綱作文。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。；要點齊全；句子及篇章結構正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。，幫家長做家務。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構思提綱。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個左右，郵件開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（舉例說明，適當發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。9．你是一位九年級的學生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對你關心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。對于優(yōu)點則重點突出，因為在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。句型不要都用簡單句。食物等相關信息，要求考生對每個信息進行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。3. 語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。注意過渡性語言的使用。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準確。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和復合句，或使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內容應由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告，談談你的做法，與同學分享經(jīng)驗。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的。如but, so, then等。t control themselves and often play games. What39。但中學生在學校是否應該持有手機，一些學生和老師有不同的觀點。（I think ???；try one39。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。最新人教版英語 中考英語書面表達專題復習練習(含解析)1一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1． 最近一份學生體質健康調查結果顯示，學生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。內容包括：學生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進行體育活動（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個人觀點：如：我認為，我們應該了解保護眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護我們的眼睛。2．今天手機在我們日常生活中已廣泛使用。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teac