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looking for.通過比較,我們可以清楚的明白,上面的句子,使用了一些不必要的詞匯,而導(dǎo)致句子看上去繁瑣難懂。例如,在高考的`時候,考生把“我要去…”寫成“俺要去…”加有地方方言的語言方式。批卷的老師很有可能并不想你一樣是個電腦高手。closesupport, transport, and reconnaissance assistance is provided by the s3x helicopter, which is the most cost effective in a crane configuration.improved: the s3x helicopter provides support, transportation, and reconnaissance. however, the helicopter is most cost effective when it works as a crane.,讀者閱讀的時候思路也會更清晰。【sat寫作高分不易!還得遵守這些規(guī)矩】相關(guān)文章:1.sat高分的寫作方法2.sat寫作高分技巧3.sat高分寫作方法4.sat寫作高分模板5.sat高分寫作結(jié)構(gòu)布局6.sat寫作的結(jié)尾高分訣竅7.關(guān)于sat寫作高分技巧8.sat高分寫作技巧。例1, the glee club held a fundraiser, the basketball team also held a fundraiser.improved sentences: the glee club and the basketball team held fundraisers (pound subject)例2, kareem o