【正文】 計入總詞數(shù)3要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was 【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。m a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined the club, so I also have made a lot of have many activities on week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。5．假如你是王梅，有一個弟弟/妹妹一直是你的夢想，去年你家里添了一個弟弟/妹妺，你非常開心，請根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫一封電子郵件給你的筆友李蕾，和她分享你的快樂，告訴她你的變化。寫作要求：（1）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名（2）包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；（3）字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚；（4）詞數(shù)80左右。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。 同意 ：1．多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女，不會做事。 2．不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語：argument爭論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機(jī)會；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。動詞不定式作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，疑問詞+to do。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。8．書面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時間長，壓力大。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。初寫短文。修改潤色。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。【高分句型一】Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己