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rotect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,給好友Li Ming回信,介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.書面表達 初三的學習生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水,也有進步、喜悅。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。你們學校的校刊英文版正在就此舉行征文活動,請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇征文。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39??梢赃m當使用高分句型。5.臨近畢業(yè),學校在學習小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動,假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長,請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示,為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價,寫一 份素質(zhì)報告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書,認為看書有很多好處(請列舉上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉點建議)…要求:表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫;要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。表達準確,注意了被動形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。 6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。學會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friends