【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。寫作時注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當使用連詞。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護大象。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。并注意上下文要語句貫通。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；、校名等相關(guān)信息。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。注意句式的多變，長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來，并對將來提出兩點希望。交通：新的飛機場已投入使用多年。污染嚴重，垃圾遍地。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic ?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng)”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is