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nvironment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn),表達(dá)流暢。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一人稱(chēng),注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。conditions)差5生活越來(lái)越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來(lái)越舒適.6你的感想…(寫(xiě)兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn),表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。提示詞語(yǔ): Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問(wèn)題: ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。句型:被動(dòng)句型。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no