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整、語言(詞匯、語法及句子結(jié)構(gòu))準(zhǔn)確和文章過渡連貫等特點(diǎn)。 根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容要求,合理劃分所給信息點(diǎn)并組織成五個句子,確保內(nèi)容完整性。 4.(課堂存在的嚴(yán)重問題之二按照比例順序)僅僅 24%的學(xué)生使用字典 等工具,甚至僅僅 3%學(xué)生課后主動學(xué)習(xí)英語。交流 )” . 4.用一般現(xiàn)在時,用 while并列句連接 (表對比 ),關(guān)鍵詞匯“ actively(主動地)” 5. 用一般現(xiàn)在時,用 because原因狀語從句(表因果),關(guān)鍵短語“ spend? doing sth花費(fèi)。 如本篇 根據(jù)邏輯關(guān)系,句與句之間可使用如下過渡詞語進(jìn)行銜接: 第二句之前用“ To our delight過渡來表示 (可喜之處) ”;第三句之前用“ On the other hand過渡來表示(存在的問題)的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系”; 第四句之前用“ What’ s worse過渡來表示(存在更嚴(yán)重的問題)的遞進(jìn)關(guān)系”;第五句之前用“ As far as I am concerned過渡來表示(個人感想)” . 整篇參考范文如下: Last week,we made a survey among 1,600 Senior 3 students on English learning. To our delight, 86% of the students like English very much and 79% of the students often follow the teachers in the other hand,the serious problem is that only half of the students take notes in class or make a revision in time and that fewer students would like to municate with the teachers when meeting ’ s worse,only 24% of the students use the dictionary while only 3% of the students learn English actively after far as I am concerned,we should spend more time studying English after class ,because frequent practice is very important for studying English. 二、 讀寫任務(wù)的解題策略 下面以一篇讀寫任務(wù)為例來說明: 閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇 150詞左右的英語短文。 1)以約 30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 [評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ] 概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫 (一) 概括部分的解題策略。好的概括具有這些特點(diǎn):主題句統(tǒng)攝支撐句,概括精煉準(zhǔn)確,邏輯性強(qiáng), 信息濃度高,大約 30 詞。如本篇關(guān)鍵詞為“ honesty(誠實(shí))”,概括應(yīng)圍繞它延伸。文章中若無主題句,則先找出各段落主題句,然后用一句話進(jìn)行加工組合濃縮概括出主題句;記敘文則用一句話概括出人物( who+did)和發(fā)生事件 (what+happening )。 如本篇對主題句中的 benefits和 diasadvantages進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充,重組支撐句為: Honesty can lead you to success while dishonesty will finally get you into trouble. 參考文章概括如下: