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to the undesirable tendency of ...... [2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .......22 后果性 揭示所討論的問(wèn)題若不解決, 將產(chǎn)生的嚴(yán)重后果.: [2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........ 二 比較對(duì)照句型321. 兩者比較 比較兩事物, 要說(shuō)出其一超過(guò)另一個(gè), 或肯定一事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn), 也肯定其缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候用 !:[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....313 后果影響 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者帶來(lái)的影響 .:[1]. Another important factor is ....[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing...For another...... Still another ...Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ... But in my opinion , ...... .作文主體部分一 原因結(jié)果分析311. 基本原因 分析某事物時(shí), 用此句型說(shuō)明其基本的或者多方面的原因.:[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenomenon of... has aroused public concern.[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... . Education is not plete with graduation. Such is the opinion of a great [4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......14 引用法 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 來(lái)引出文章要展開(kāi)論述的觀點(diǎn)!: Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than... [3]. Now, it is monly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....12 現(xiàn)象法 引出要剖析的現(xiàn)象或者問(wèn)題, 然后評(píng)論 .[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.goour’severybodyMisusage)所謂“綜合性語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤”,是指除了上述十種錯(cuò)誤以外,還有諸如時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)態(tài),標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),大小寫等方面的錯(cuò)誤。thingis與thingswaterthingsis例1. Thebuyusethebejustandpeopleofhelikeheof寫句子沒(méi)有一個(gè)多余的詞;寫段落沒(méi)有一個(gè)無(wú)必要的句子。alsochemical改為:The(不斷增加的使用)”)剖析:顯然,考生把obstacles“障礙”,“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。agricultureof所以作文中用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤比比皆是。inwithwemanyworld.learnways改為:the以及“We剖析:這個(gè)句子包含了兩層完整的意思:“Therethewe例1. Thereitknow和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。yourself.societycanbewantedmy這個(gè)句子可改為:Maryherwantedmy試看下面這一句:Marymoney. 六. 指代不清(Ambiguousdenymoney.剖析:negativenegativePartsneedsincollege”“togooddoten,grandfather,agegrandfatherage,andexampleto.”不是一個(gè)完整的句子,僅為一些不連貫的詞語(yǔ),不能獨(dú)立成句.改為:There,newspaperexample.,newspaperexampleknowareworldwillitbelievewantscanonewantcanonehavedotohasdo(toIwellbetteroutsidemanythebyandbyandareknow,bynewspaper. 四. 懸垂修飾語(yǔ)(Danglingofdied.of如果我們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語(yǔ)改明確一點(diǎn),全句就不那么費(fèi)解了.改為:Whenmywellgradesdo的邏輯主語(yǔ)不清楚.改為:Tocollege,goodofthe系形容詞,誤作動(dòng)詞。theReferencewassisterherbridesmaid.(瑪麗和我姐姐很要好,因?yàn)樗鏊陌槟?。wassistermyheralsoby改為:Wesocietyourselves. 七. 不間斷句子(RunonaregetoutsidearegetoutsideThereforabout或:wayscantheDiction)Diction例1. Thechemicalalso另外“the應(yīng)改為“abusiveabusivesubstancescauses/leads能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。theishim.本句的“theishislikewhokind,theusedthingDiligent,moneywhatfreshtheof與逗號(hào)后的it在數(shù)方面不一致。thein例1.Today,iseat,etc. 作文開(kāi)頭部分11 對(duì)立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, [2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ... has been brought into focus. ( has been braught to public attention) [3]. American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional plains as this .......15 比較法 通過(guò)對(duì)過(guò)去,現(xiàn)在 兩種不同的傾向,觀點(diǎn)的比較 , 引出文章要討論的觀點(diǎn).: 17 [2]. Indeed,