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4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many. 注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高?! ∠旅娼o出寫好一篇作文的注意事項: ,這樣能更客觀的反映事實,句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its petitive edge will be sharpened effectively. ,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。六級150—180字?! ∈欠耖L短句交叉?! ∪鏷owever / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞,助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號?! omputer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a puter as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly替換very thrilling替換exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb. be interested in sth. google替換search an army of替換a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of puters. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, puters pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!本文來源:考試大網(wǎng) The dawn of the new century witnessed是一個精彩句型,用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情?! g. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因為是書面語,所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing 8: shared代mon huge fruits代替get much benefit ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。… It goes without saying that子句 = (It is) needless to say (that)子句 = It is obvious that子句 = Obviously, S. + V. 例︰不用說早睡早起是值得的?! here is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. … I am greatly convinced (that)子句 = I am greatly assured (that)子句 例︰我深信預(yù)防是于治療?! mong various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 5.…是很容易證明的?!?。… As far as my knowledge is concerned, … 例︰就我所知184。近視在我國的年輕人中是一個嚴重的問題。 According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good. 11. 在我認識的人當中184?! f all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher. 12. 在我的求學(xué)過程中184?!缪葜匾慕巧?。s industrial society, … is indispensable to life. 例︰在這信息的年代184。 In dealing with …, one cannot but admit (that)子句 例︰在討論未來的職業(yè)184。s future career as early as possible. 16. 世上沒有什么比…更令我高興。我就忍不住感到興奮。我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised. 例︰每當我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪184?! he main reason why the juveniles mit crimes is that social environment is being worse.21. 俗語說得好:「…」?! s an old saying goe